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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Swayam's interaction with the small boy was too cute !! Loved how smart the boy acted and sweet Swayam entertaining the boy !! The end part was the best where the boy was you like her..Tell her you like her !! I hope Swayam realises in the next chapter that he truly like Sharon !!

Thanks for noticing these small parts.. Happy to see you liked it.. You'll see what they feel for each other in the next part.. =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon

Kids are sometimes the one who teach us a lesson just like the little boy here. The boys-convo was nicely written. both the boys depicted entirely different attributes and opinion about love. the boy who is mature enough to understand the feeling of love doesn't know how to acknowledge the feeling while the little boy who shouldn't be knowing much knows everything,that is something amusing yet awesome. seems like the little boy is experienced much. wish the big boy gets to know about the feeling soon. Loved the update.

thanks for the PM. looking forward to the next update.



Thanx for the comment Ananya 😳..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Rutu

The kid was really smart for his age. Loved it how he commented on Swayam's ghuring session! Loved the update and specially this line made me laugh when Swayam said "I feel you should behave like a human"😆

Update soon and thanks for the PM.



glad you liked it 😳..SS will be updated ASAP!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shaani2209

the convo of swayam and that kiddo was amusing...loved it...

do pm me when u update...



sure and thanks =)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Wowwie a swaron ff!!:):)
Awesome updates!!:)
Loved sharon's pov n d 1st part!!:)
And d second was amazing!!:)
Waiting for d next part!!:)
And sorry for d late comment!!!



it's okay 😳..glad you're liking it =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: swaronilicious

the kid part was AWESOME

pls pm me when you update
brilliant concept😃⭐️



thanks!..do as us in your buddy list to get PMS if you haven't. =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: swaron24

nice update! the kid convo was super cute

lolz he has a girlfriend and swayam is still in the ghurring stage 😆
update soon



Thanks =)..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

when r u updating 😊



Today only,after sometime, sorry for the delay 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Here's the 3rd chapter,. sorry for the delay. it' slengthy one, hope you all like it. and we have replied to each n evry commnt this time 😃* we hope we din't miss any ..sorry if we did*

Enjoy :)


Three

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He saw his phone buzzing for the millionth time probably.
Another voice'call, he opened it and it read: SWAYAM!!...one minute late and I swear you are going to be murdered. He gulped hard.

He increased his driving speed and drove much like a lunatic. He was about to hit an elderly middle-aged women but managed to put the brakes on time. He could see the women looking at him horrified; he apologized to her, gave her one of his 'innocent smile' and then started his car.
"Sharon you will surely get me killed one day" he said still driving recklessly.
After about 10-12 minutes he reached her place, outside the house, in bold letters it read, RAI PRAKASH MANISION.

He parked his car and went straight towards the main door. He rung the door bell and stood there impatiently, checking himself if he still looked presentable. After about a minute the door was opened by one of the helper, the helper greeted Swayam and Swayam being the polite one replied back too. He knew all most all the people working here; after all he had known this place for 11 years now. The helper led him to the main hall where the two sweetest people on Earth were sitting, Mr. Gautam Rai Prakash and his beloved wife. Damn, if you think parents are boring or anything you have to meet Sharon's Parents, as Swayam says 'the coolest parents ever'. The helper informed them of their 'guest' and went away. Swayam went and greeted them.

"Hey Swayam long time ha' where have you been lately" Gautam asked.

"Well nothing much uncle' thinking about business and all"

"The boy has grown up now " Gautam said while Smita, his wife smiled.

"Okay beta will you have something?...you don't eat properly these days ,you look so thin.

"No, no aunty thank you ...will directly go to party only ' Mom has been away for a while and you now na I don't like cook's food very much" Swayam said to Smita .

"So why don't you come here ? ...From tomorrow you better join us, " Smita smiling with a bit strictness in her voice.

"Umm..Aunty"
But Smita cut in between "no if and buts Swayam you have to be here!" Smita said to which Swayam nodded like a good boy.

"SWAYAM!!..." Sharon shouted at the top of her voice standing near the stairs.

"Hi Sharon" Swayam said nonchalantly.

"You should be here apologizing to me and here you are talking to my parents!" Sharon said raging.

" Sharon!.. thats not the way to talk to Swayam" Gautam said looking at his daughter and pitying Swayam in his mind.

"But daddy! He is Swayam!.. and he is an idiot!" Sharon said pouting.

"fine , fine..sorry" he said with both his hands on his ears.

*sigh*.."fine!.. lets leave now?"

"Sharon from tomorrow Swayam will be joining us for lunch, dinner and if possible breakfast too, his mother is out of town and you better don't fight" Smita said.

Sharon looked at her mother horrified," I fight?!!..i don't fight!..he fights!!...you always take his side" Sharon said pouting.

"Sharon!.. don't behave like a kid"

" ya ya..blame me only.. And you will cook his favorite food I know" Sharon said .

"So?...she loves me more than you, you don't know" Swayam said smiling a 32-teeth smile.
Sharon glared at him. " I am going" Sharon said.

" where?" Swayam asked innocently.

"Party duffer!"..arghhh'" Sharon said thinking why does she love this retard.

She din't get her answer. Getting reasons to hate someone is much easier than the reasons why you love them.

"arghh.. now m getting philosophical and talking to myself yet again, perfect" Sharon cursed her thoughts.

"I should better leave now or she will surely kill me"

Both Gautam and Smita nodded and bid him goodbye.

Swayam walked faster and saw her standing outside the door.

"Let's go princess" Swayam said.

"don't call me that!..argh Swayam, I hate you!"

"Fine, fine!.." He goes down on his knees "sorry for the leg pulling and yes for being late. I promise next time I will be on time. Sorry Shar *holds ear*' he completed; looking cute as ever.

*sigh*"Get up!... how many times have you tried this?!..Works pretty well with girls ha?" She said now smiling and goes towards the car.

"Only for you" he said under his breathe and went towards the car.

"When did this car got scratched, ha?.. " she asked moving her fingers over a small scratch at the right side of the car.

Swayam looked at it and then remembered the 'barely missed accident' he had a while ago.
"Oh' nothing just in the way was driving a bit fast so maybe that time, I din't notice" he said casually and got in. Sharon too got in the car.

"Are you crazy or what!!..i told you to come fast not to land yourself in a hospital" Sharon started scolding him"
"It was okay Shar.. Nothing happened"

"so?..are you waiting for something to happen?"

"Shar, Shar calm down .. Nothing happened and the best part I'm alive!..So peace" he said showing the peace sign.

"To hell with you Swayam!.."

"By the way if I got killed.. you would be crying for me na" he said looking at her smirking.

"No way!.. why should I?.. I would be partying somewhere.. after all one of the world's greatest psychopath was dead" Sharon said fake smiling.

"Haw' how rude Sharon" he said making a baby face.

"Look straight Swayam or you will get me killed too"

" toh good na, two psychopaths dead together!"he said..

She punched him on his shoulder and smiled.

While in Rai Prakash Mansion.

"Do you think they will ever confess to each other?" Smita asked her husband.
"I hope so.."

"yeah..They look perfect together"

"But only if she doesn't kill him today" Gautam said and both broke away in a small laugh.
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Outside the college.

He got out and like a perfect gentleman opened her car door. She smiled looking at him.

"So shall we? He asked her.

She nodded and then crossed her arms with his just like a couple.

They moved inside and were greeted by fellow classmates. They all got busying talking about their days spent together in college. They laughed thinking about their pranks in canteen and how much they had to always butter up the staff to not complain about them, all the times when they were late or too bored to attend classes they would jump in and out from the wall at the far end of the campus, all those college fest they had enjoyed together, dancing, singing and what not!. Those were the days and they will definitely cherish it.

"Guys stop getting nostalgic now!...Its not that we are dying or anything right?.. So lets enjoy the party now" Sharon said went away.

"Yeah this whole goodbye thing sucks, I'm gonna leave too" Swayam said and followed Sharon.

"Dance?"

"Cool" Sharon said

They both headed for dance floor and started swaying to the music. They danced, ate a little and a small photo session to capture this moment forever. It had been nearly two hours in their party now.

"Swayam I'm bored yaar' Lets go out" Sharon whispered in his ear as the music was too loud.

"umm.. okay.." he replied.

They bid their friends goodbye and went outside.

"Swayam..we passed college! " she said in excitement and little in disbelief.." good old days" she said smiling.

"Yea. .Time does passes by fast "he replied.

"Hey remember, when were newbie in college, you were so scared and like a kid" Sharon said laughing.

"I was not!..look who is speaking.. When you heard I was in the same college' You came running to me and hugged, huh!" Swayam said in his defense.

" That..that was because I was excited to see you nothing else.. And I'm not scared, ever!" Sharon said proudly.

"Yea yea' a mere sight of cockroach and you freak like it's a dinosaur" Swayam said chuckling.

"That is because I hate it!.. it such a slimy creature..yuck!" Sharon replied instantly.

"Fine leave it...Let's talk about something better. Do you remember the late night phone calls before exams" Swayam said changing the topic.

"Yes, and you were such a lazy ass then ' Had to call you 15 times or so to wake you up for studies.

"I'm not a person who sacrifices sleep for study Shar and by the way I wouldn't have flunk right?. So?"

" Yea right!.. their 7 chapters in last eco exams and you thought its only 4!.." be thankful" Sharon said with her brows corossed.

"fine.. but I'm not always wrong"

"ye yea.." Sharon said ending the argument.

They both became silent at once and were walking quietly now. They were looking aimlessly at the street ahead.

She sighed as she shifted her gaze to the sky; it was covered with dark clouds. The winds were high and Sharon shuddered when it hit her bare shoulders. Swayam offered his jacket and she gladly accepted it. And then they again became silent but it wasn't awkward, they were at ease with each other's silence. Feeling the presence of each other and wishing it would last for a little more time.

"You are leaving India?" she asked earnestly looking at him

"Yeah'Probably after a week" he said as he taking a deep sigh.

She looked at him with a million questions in her mind. Why was he leaving?, when will he be back?, He will remember her, right?, he will miss her, right? And most important question, are they just friends or' *sigh*She din't knew and somewhere at the back of her mind, she din't wanted to know either. No she hasn't gone mental, yet. But to her this friendship was above all her attraction and feelings. She also knew if she din't ask him in these few days before he leaves, she will go crazy afterwards and curse herself. *sigh* she would probably go crazy soon, very soon. She said muttering curses to her conscious. She din't realize that, while fighting with her conscious and drawing possible conclusions about herself she had been looking in his direction.

He was captivated by her gaze. And before could speak a word he found himself drowning in those big green eyes. It reflected different emotions in them. Happy, sad, care, concern and above all love. He removed his gaze and looked down instead. No, he had already gone through this, How can he be falling for his best friend?!. No this isn't happening, he had ordered himself. He very well knew that his mind won't let him live in peace till he confessed to her. He had realized his feeling way back but maybe he was scared' scared to lose the friendship, scared to lose that one person who mattered to him the most in this whole wide world. And yes! In no freaking way was he letting his feeling come before in between. Maybe she does feel the same, his mind often proposed and he should take his chances after all. He was in a bad situation a real bad one. *sigh* now I'm again talking to myself!. Swayam Shekhawat you will go bonkers soon, very soon.

Finally she broke the silence and spoke up.

"I will miss you"

He looked at her and smiled.

"Of course you will! ... I'm so freaking awesome!" he said with a smirk.. And both started laughing.
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Okay so that was chapter 3, the next chapter which will be the last chapter of this SS will be post up ASAP! 😳.

Pms sent😃
Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was really sweet n cute update
Sharon like a boss angry on swayam n swayam our majnu try to cool her anger 😆
Loved their cute lil nok jhok
Swayam leaving India,hope they confess their feeling
Waiting for next part
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 13 years ago

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