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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
An awesome start, loved the concept where Swayam and Sharon know each other from long and are BFF's who control each other and till now we know Sharon has fallen for him. Waiting to hear about Swayam too. I loved the way Sharon was writing in her diary as if she was talking to it.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
AWESOME concept...SWARON as best friends ...loved the level of comfort they shared ...loved the diary part ...plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Second

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Convo in Car

" And shopping today?..party? he asked

"Duffer!!..we have farewell party next week!"

"But I thought u already shopped for that…we came here last Sunday!"

"Yeah just had to grab some lil things"

"hmphh..girls" he muttered under his breathe

"hmm?" she asked with her one brow raised

"Nothing ,just hate you!"

"Aww baby so sad" she said mockingly.

The whole way they chatted about random things and Swayam whining about not being able to sleep, all because of his"Chudail" best friend.

"You know Sharon sometimes I feel you should behave like a 'human' " he said getting out of the car.

"With people like you around that's just not possible "she said fake smiling.

"hmph.. So where do we start"

"There!" she said pointing towards a store at the far end.

They both walked in and soon Sharon got busy in finding some accessories to match with her dress.

After about 20 minutes

"I thought you here to buy some 'lil' things Sharon"

"Swayam!..see this Gucci piece !! it won't take long pakka"

"Shar.." and before he could complete his sentence she was inside the trial room with a dozen of dresses"

"GIRLS!"

He looked around and saw the store was quite big and had about almost everything. He decided to go around and check it out.

As far as he knew her, he was sure she won't be out of that trial room for about a half n hour or so. She loved shopping and always managed to drag him along .Though he wasn't a great shopping freak or anything, he loved spending time with her. 11 years of friendship, yeah! Where do you hear all these stuffs nowadays? As cheesy as it sounds he was lucky, lucky to have her. He would often call her 'angel and sunshine' not just to butter her up for help but also she was the sunshine of his life, he had admitted to himself and no less than an angel; of course he din't tell her!. Nah she hates cheesy stuffs and he would often err... More than often use all those soppy Hindi dialogues just to annoy her. Avoiding the deathly glares the look on her face was priceless, eyes raging with fire and her nose turning red as a tomato and she still managed to look cute!. Yeah that's Sharon. He smiled as he thought about her and turned towards the gallery section of the store.

The section was also divided. He decided not to go to gifts section as there was no use of it. He turned his gaze and saw posters hung up at a corner, he was about to step forward when he remembered his mother's deadly warnings. The thing was he loved graphics, posters and whenever he would come across such things, he would always buy a couple of them and other things for his room, which by the way was no less than a "garage "as named by his mom. So he would buy stuffs and like a normal teenage guy 'keep' it 'somewhere' it his room which sadly was not approved by his mom. So yeah home rule #3 clean room= new things! I would rather skip the first two rules, I am digressing u see. The thought of going through the whole drama in house made him dread and he decided to chuck it and looked further. After about a minute the card section caught his eye and he smiled.

He was aimlessly looking at the cards. Birthday cards, anniversary cards and lovey-dovey cards. He looked at the other sides there were some gifts too, mostly all those heart gifts, teddys and all. He wouldn't understand one thing about these teddy bears, I mean why on Earth are girls so crazy about it!..Seriously! okay its cute, fluffy but hey it's a doll!. Girls would kill you if u mess with there teddy bears, no conditions applied here and well he had a very a good experience of it, thanks to Sharon. She so freaking loved it. Ah and more things,why these teddy bears with 'I love you and all' written on it… I mean uhh!!..Why not say it, it looks so uhh clich!. And for the first time Sharon too agreed with him on this.

He walked further and saw a small boy looking intently at each and every card, reading it and then keeping it back. He was about 7-8 years old, Swayam could make out. He walked up to the little kiddo and looked at him amusingly. The kid raised his, passed Swayam a not so friendly look and then continued to do his work. Swayam followed his gaze and was a bit surprised; the kid was looking at lovey-dovey cards. Swayam looked at the kid who looked pretty fascinating to him and so he decided to kick start a conversation.

"Hey...what are you doing here" Swayam said.

The kid looked at him, raised a brow and then looked at the cards and his expressions said "D'uh!"

Stupid question!

"Hmm…So you are alone?...or with some else"

This time the kid reacted more and opened up his mouth

"You are seriously bored, na?"

Swayam looked at him amusingly. And then sighed.

"Yeah"

The kid smiled.

"Well .. I don't get it.. you are probably7-8..

The kid cut in between and said " 8 " proudly.

"Okay so you are 8 and why are you here?..i mean this card section?" Swayam asked.

"For my girlfriend" the boy said nonchalantly.

Swayam expression varied from shock to surprise to chuckle

"Girlfriend..huh??..Who is she?" Swayam thought getting more interested now.

"Arushi" the boy answered with a huge smile on his face.

Swayam smiled looking at him.

"so ?..Why are you here?..For your girlfriend?" this time the boy asked.

"nope.. I was just roaming about here"

The boy looked at him with a quizzically, debating whether that was sarcastic or genuine.

Swayam as if reading his mind continued

"I'm here with a friend, she is looking for some dresses"

The boy again looked at him but then shrugged and turned about

"friend..huh??.."said the boy teasingly.

"Yes!..friend.. you see all are not so intelligent like you that girls would like them"

The boy smiled 32-teeths and proudly said waving his hand as a celebrity "I know..i know"

This made Swayam laugh, this boy was sure an entertainer.

As he stood there conversing with a kiddo, he heard a sharp voice, calling out his name.

"SWAYAM!!!"

"Ah, Sharon is finally out of that trial room, he thought.

He got up and looked towards the apparel section. Luckily from where he stood, there was clear view. He saw her standing in front of the huge mirror ,looking at herself and twirling around, she was such a kid!*smiles* she was wearing an ocean blue knee length dress and needless to say looked stunning as ever. He would sometimes wonder how she managed to look so?..PERFECT?!.. Yeah perfect, well she was perfect saying it by looks or her nature or any other aspect of life. She was one those people who could be your nightmare and sweetheart depends on you treat her, he would often wonder as to why she was still single?. I mean yeah many people are, he is also single but well she, she was on whole different level he believed. She is one of those people whom you could talk to about anything and everything and not worry about it spread, she is one of those girls who din't move about to bitch or gossip about anyone, she had better things than that. She had her own life and she loved it. She is the apple of everyone's eyes. She is just a limited edition God created. Swayam chuckled at his thoughts, blame Shakespeare his mind said.

"stop 'ghurring 'her" said a voice behind him.

He turned about only to find the little kid smirking. Damn!.

"What?..i was just..i just seeing if she is looking good or not"

"Ahh" the boy acted and then burst out laughing.

"you and your friend!" the boy said and again started laughing.

Swayam waited patiently for him to stop, after a min he did.

"Why don't you tell her that you like her"

"cause I don't!."

"oh c'mmon. Its written on your face that you like her, you were 'ghurring' her now!" the kid said smiling.

"I was not!..ah..well..she is my best friend"

"Aare just tell her...and if u get beaten up then run!" the boy said" ..my big brother had told me" he completed.

Swayam smiled.

"Free advice hai..do tell her how you fell, you will be very happy" said the kid and started to walk away.

"Bye.. and yess..she looks pretty" the boy winked and walked away further while Swayam just stood there smiling at his little stranger.

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Here's chapter 2, we personally felt we messed it a bit. But still review.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
The update was just so pleasant and cute girls 🤗
I had a huge grin pastered on my face till I read the last word of it.
The way Swayam adores her and thinks bout her,I'm not surprised that the kid got to know his feelings so soon,OMGEE that kid was just so cute,from Arushi to cards to being smart and that ghurring part seriously got me LOL.And then the free advice 'if you get beaten up,simply RUN.' 😆
You know I missed Sharon's POV in this update. 🤔 I would like to see more of what she feels about her equation with Swayam and other things.Overall total light-hearted,well written chapter.Well done,women :)
Thanks for the PM and update soon!
Love from,
Neha
Edited by -Nia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
cute update!!!do cntinue...nd nope its not messed up...👏

thankss 4 the pm btw...😊
Edited by binuja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Kids!! Ye to acho acho ke bhi baap nikalenge!! Nicely written chapter. After reading Sharon's POV in last chapter it was fitting to read Swayam's POV this time and it was certinly written awesomely. His equation with and his feeling for Sharon was just fantastically written. The whole kid and Swayam conversation was oddly amusing in its own way. Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Loved it ..Please PM me next time when you update.
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Loved d boy... 😳
Update soon... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
It was really a cute update
Its really good to read about swayam's feelings for sharon though he didn't committed like sharon but still he think about her everytime...:)
That kid part was quite amusing
He is 8yr old n he have a gf ahh thats called modern kid...:p
Swayam n his convo was hilarious specially when he told swayam.about his gf n when that kid teases him when he caught swayam staring at sharon..
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Nce part
loved it😊

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