SwaRon SS : F.R.I.E.N.D.S [COMPLETED]

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Wow itz awesum..!! Dis story is awesum... Loved d way u hav written it..
Update soon n surely pm me...
Thnkz fr d pm..!!

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kria1996

@kria1996

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

nice !

luvd it !

plz pm me when u update ! 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Swayam's interaction with the small boy was too cute !! Loved how smart the boy acted and sweet Swayam entertaining the boy !! The end part was the best where the boy was you like her..Tell her you like her !! I hope Swayam realises in the next chapter that he truly like Sharon !!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Kids are sometimes the one who teach us a lesson just like the little boy here. The boys-convo was nicely written. both the boys depicted entirely different attributes and opinion about love. the boy who is mature enough to understand the feeling of love doesn't know how to acknowledge the feeling while the little boy who shouldn't be knowing much knows everything,that is something amusing yet awesome. seems like the little boy is experienced much. wish the big boy gets to know about the feeling soon. Loved the update.

thanks for the PM. looking forward to the next update.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

The kid was really smart for his age. Loved it how he commented on Swayam's ghuring session! Loved the update and specially this line made me laugh when Swayam said "I feel you should behave like a human"😆

Update soon and thanks for the PM.

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

the convo of swayam and that kiddo was amusing...loved it...

do pm me when u update...

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Lovely update..kid part is sweet.

beautifully written.

do continue soon.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Wowwie a swaron ff!!:):)
Awesome updates!!:)
Loved sharon's pov n d 1st part!!:)
And d second was amazing!!:)
Waiting for d next part!!:)
And sorry for d late comment!!!