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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

That was such a beautiful chapter. I am just loving how this story is shaping up. Thank you so much for the PM😊

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

loved it

if arnav can workout in the morning...i want to too!! but i m super lazy

what to dooo

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

all the work out went to waste

now arnav is back on working his mind to no limits

to wonder why nani would want to meet khushi's parents

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AnnieCheli1997

@AnnieCheli1997

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

Wow!! I go on holiday for 5 days and all of a sudden I have like 3 pages full of PM's an about 6 updates from you!! :) xxx
Well what can I say... Loved the meeting between Khushi and Miss Singh!! :) xxx It was hilarious I think Khushi getting Jealous and the rest!! :) xxx
Then when Khushi and Nani met I was like awww!! :) xxx They have such a great bond in this FF an I love that!! :D xxx It kinda reminds me of me and my nani!! :) xxx
Then the hot bits with Arnav and Khushi were just like whoo!! ;) xxx I don't even know what to say!! :) xxx
I can't wait to read the following updates!! :) xxx
Please update soon!! :D xxx

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

I'm speechless! Amazing story, writing style and flow. Your entire story is so unique. Love the way you have focused on a mature relationship between Khushi & Arnav. The family has been shown minimal. The chemistry between your Khushi & Arnav is amazing! Your words are so real that I have felt every emotion and thought that Arnav & Khushi have gone through.

I read the entire 48 chapters in 48 hours! That's how good this is. Please update soon. You have me hooked.

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#686

superb updates!!
loved the one where it was so hard for arnav to let go of khushi from shantivan!!
loved that he heard a part of nani-khushi convo, & khushi understood so easily what was bothering him & comforted him so awesomely!!
& their "talks"😉, kiss, him speaking near her ears, all was sizzling!!
now, nani wants to meet gupta family...i hope this wouldn't over-pressurize arnav suddenly.

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pearlo

@pearlo

Beginner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

first of all sorry for the late reply...i absolutely LOVE this ztory...ur story takes me on this ride where i feel i am a part oftheir world or rather the entire event is unfolding right in front of my eyes...Arnav taKing shower too included ...!!! ;) i dont know but have you considered bringing in the jealousy thing esp from Arnav's side...n please do not rush into getting them to gdt physical...i would rathr wait ...the tensions between them always keeps me glued...n brings out their best...khushi being fiesty n Arnav dark n broody...please consider same...otherwise ur the captain of the ship...!! do tc dear n thanq for the pm's...oh hey...best of luck for the interview ...hope you rock them...!!!! :)

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

Originally posted by: sunshine99
Naina best of luck with the job interview... hum aapke cliffhanger update ka intezaar karenge...loved the bold Khushi... poor ASR has to really wrk hard on his self control...😉 Khushi now Nani.. the pressure is sure building up.. now on whom will the dam burst??

thanks Hun!!

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: TRND86
Thank you for writing a very different story on our favorite Arnav & Khushi. I love how their feelings are progressing, how their characters are developing and changing as their relationship evolves. I love how you have dealt with their emotions & how you have shown that change doesn't occur in a heartbeat. It takes time & effort to make relationships work no matter how much love is present. It is very close to reality and I think that's what pulls at my heartstrings. Keep writing & I'll keep reading.
P.S. Good luck with the interview.

Thank you very much - hope you stay with us!!

Naina

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: Love_SA
loved it

if arnav can workout in the morning...i want to too!! but i m super lazy Dont worry me... cant be bothered in the morning!

what to dooo Hey if Arnav came and invited me to workout... I might consider morning workouts 😉

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