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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late reply 😳. I read both chapters in one go and they were both so tocuhing. Especially part 47. Something tells me that Arnav will end up marrying Khushi soon. I just hope that he doenst start to avoid her becuase of his inner turmoil. That last chapter was so beautifully written. Especially what Khushi said to Naniji about how DM made her and Arnav meet for a reason that part was just so poignant.
Thank you for two such beautiful chapters. And thank you for updating so quickly.
Thankks a ton for the PM and I hoope you do update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

😆😆
Chalo! No more guessing games .. just keep the biology classes coming. I will keep my mouth shut. 😆
Well, seriously dear, it is just that you have built up these two characaters over the previous chapters so well and also been so consistent that we do understand their thought process now. You should really pat on your back for that. You have done a great job here .. I feel like sort of anylyzing what is to come, as I do in Crooner for the show itself. 😆
Will be waiting to see Arnav vs. Arnav .. !! It is going to be intense .. I assume .. but cant predict with you around!! 😆😆




Thank you darling... Sending you a hug!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panck

Naina - "Arnav sighed as he ran his hand through his now very short black."

What a jab. I am sure the pun here was totally intended.

"Very Short Black" indeed.

Loved Arnav's struggle but have faith that his love will overcome his trepidation.


Pankaj



Absolutely intended and well detected... Hopefully someone from the prod house sees this... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rusticreet

perfect...there is so much positivity in the story that everytime i read it i m bowled and refreshed...than k u so much for this FF...


n hey!!

i never complain about the length, do i? 😉



Neveeerrr my darling 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sai_neha

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Hey Nainz

Gal Never expected 3 updates with in 4 to 5 days...Nainz did I tell u ...Love u for this ❤️⭐️
❤️⭐️❤️⭐️...Was not able to read chapters 45 n 46 on weekend ...was busy with personal work...just now read all 3 chapters(Stalking did work ...read chap 47😆)

Points to Ponder 😉 for 3 chapters

Finally Khushi agreed to meet his Naniji and she has started to observe Arnav and she know when he turns into ASR and Aranv mode 😆😆😆...Ms. Nandini Thakur Singh...aah she did notice Khushi and thought Khushi was the mysterious ASR's Girl...but brushed that thought aside (Nainz you have penned it awesome gal )

Arnav introducing Khushi to Nandini and then their meeting about his statement abroad about his personal life...wow and Khushi did know that Aranv was pissed when Ms. Singh had rubbed him the wrong way ..by telling him that he could not go and let the media know about his personal life ...and she wanted him to make his press release ...God how ASR turned the tables and made it clear that he would not give a press release when the Media wants...and he would give when he thinks/decides that it is the time world knows who ASR is dating and also the subtle message he conveyed to Ms.Singh that indeed he was seeing Khushi and that he did not want her name to be dragged ...and he ending the meeting ( it was EPIC ASR speaking to his employee 😆)


Khushi's reaction when Arnav asked if she was fine ...he did sense that she was not alright and he explained that Ms. Singh is/should be alright since she has been working in AR for a long time, and he also informed that he did date Ms.Singh some time back...and Khushi's female instincts kicked in and also remembered the last glances Ms.Singh threw her and Arnav...she knew Ms.Singh was jealous of her.

When Arnav saw khushi's expression and found that she was jealous...knowing that he had dated Ms. Singh ...and wanted to know her view/thought and he did question her if his past was disturbing her...by doing so he really awoke his Tigress 😉😉😉...she said that He belonged to him and that she never cares whom he dated before her...now he was her's(loved the Jealous Khushi 😆) ...I was wondering that was it only Arnav who was possessive about khushi, however this update changed my views😃😃

Arnav's Naniji finally meeting Khushi and also Khushi's nervousness thinking about how the meeting his Nani and Aranv providing her the support/comfort that everything will be fine.

Enjoyed Nani and Khushi's interaction...rather question and answer session Nani had with Khushi, she was enjoying her conversation...however Aranv did find that his nani was seeking info about khushi and her family ...and when he excused to attend the his call...his nani letting him know that she would not trouble Khushi bitiya (sure sign that his nani has accepted khushi) ...Loved how Nani discussed her worries with khushi about Arnav's view/thoughts about marriage and commitment ...It was really touching to read Khushi's response that she believes in Aranv and that he would work or would find a middle ground ...which would work in the long run...and Aranv eavesdropping on their conversation and thinking about khushi's confidence/strong belief in him...it was really well penned by you 👏

Khushi helping his nani in preparing dinner in the Kitchen and Arnav seeing this and thought that Khushi belonged here with in his family and they chattering away having dinner and nani sensing that she had to take khushi's leave and leave the two of them share some space...loved the realtionship that is forming between Khushi and his nani 👏

Good that nani sent khushi to arnav's room and ...khushi hesitating and then entering his room after his invitation to go inside his room...soon khushi realized that arnav was not in good mood and informed that she would wait for him in the drawing room...arnav telling that it was alright and khushi seeing/inspecting his room and simultaneously arnav thinking how he had imagined khushi in his house and his room 😆...finally khushi seeing the poolside and wanted to see it...and when arnav did allow her to see the poolside ...and then arnav saving khushi from falling 😉...he asking her that it's late and he wanted to drop her home...she did know that he was trying to mask his emotions/feelings ...loved their convo( nothing much to write since you penned their arguments/view/thoughts very well) 👏..enough of my rant ...loved all 3 chaps Nainz...eagerly waiting to read more chapters.

Cheers,
Sai_Neha







Thank you for being such a sweet heart and writing this detailed post... I loved reading it sooo much and it's your love that makes writing this story sooo worth it... A million time thank you!

Naina
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awsome!!!!
Poor arnie...but he got himself in to this 😉
great update!
They are so adorable 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update, thanks for the extended length.
Nani-Khushi's conversation was beautifully written, Khushi being herself is truly a perfect marriage material (typical to nani's liking). Very well portrayed.
Arnav's emotional turmoil with Khushi knowing despite no words spoken shows the understanding she has abt him and their relationship.
I must say I really like your Khushi here. Intelligent, grounded yet bold. It's not easy for one to commit into a relationship which has unknown destiny. It could either be a "happily ever after" or totally broken when one is still unwilling to commit.
Love makes a relationship but I truly believe that it's also the commitment that keeps it going. Excited to know Arnav-Khushis upcoming challenges in keeping their bond going. Hope you'll rock just as how you did so far.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was awesome, love the Nani-Khushi bond! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love how Arnav finds solace in Khushi and how they're so complete with each other. I love the love they've for each other and I cant stop admiring their bond :)

loved the update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it so arnav heard partial conversation anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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