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Posted: 12 years ago
awww so sweet awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
awesome
memories r complicated even if u dnt want they r always with u
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Posted: 12 years ago
I knew she would be making jalebies, but not being able to get it right was least expected. It was a very poignant scene. Does it mean she is ready to try to build up her life again though not yet ready to enjoy it, making jalebies yet not eat them.
What suprise? Is it her baby shower?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!!
im glad to see Kushi sslowly changing:P
why didnt she eat the jelabies?????
its also good to see the bonding between Anjali and Kushi
im gussing the surprise is that kushi's or Arnav's familiy is there???
thanx for the pm :P
pls pm me when u update next :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am at peace seeing the gap between Arnav and Khushi slowly pinch until there is no distance between them. The jalebi making has lighted this ray of hope in my heart. That things will get better between them soon. Arnav has grown as a person...as a husband...as a brother. The way he takes care of Khushi. The way he behaves with Aman. I am so happy to see Khushi recovering. She is a very strong person.

Aman and Anjali. They have something, don't know? That silent affection, that silent understanding. Aman is so sweet when it comes to handling Dev.

Wonder what the surprise is? Is it a baby shower? *squeals with excitement* Khushi would be so happy!

Eager to read more. Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

Manal <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
my god:) at last khushi has started tslking to arnav:)
really loved tat part:)
wen she said "i dont wanna eat jalebis'" this shows the moodswings of a pregnant ladies:)
u r really a unpredictable writer:) plz continue soon, eagerly waiting for d upcoming parts:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story awesome update

continue soon

thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update and loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a sweet update

"Khushi please stop crying. Make whatever you want to. Why are you upset?" he took a deep breath and continued in an extremely soft tone "I will not shout, promise. Tell me please" he was now standing right before her. He tilted her chin up with his hand and asked her again "What happened?"

Khushi cried more rapidly and replied "Hum se jalebiya nahi ban rahi hai. I tried a lot"❤️ saying this she broke into sobs and Arnav hugged her immediately stroking her back saying everything will be alright. When she had calmed down somehow, he cupped her face and spoke encouragingly "Why don't you try again? May be it will turn out better this time, huh?"

"I tried five times, already" she spoke between hiccups.🤔 Arnav brought a glass of water for her, she drank thirstily. She placed the glass back on the counter and stood staring at the batter filled bag.

"Make some jalebies, Khushi. I am sure they will turn out fine" Arnav persuaded her.🤗 AT LEAST HE SUPPORTED HER MY HUSBAND WOULD HAVE SHOUTED & SAID U WASTED ALL THIS FOOD 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
such a sweet n touching update loved it a lot... sooo hapy tht khushi spoke to arnav n also the anjali aman scene was nyc , waiting to know whts the surprise ty 4 the pm... waiting to read further...


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