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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the naughty arnav...plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahahah..i loved the slap and last line actually it made me l laugh hard hahahahahha..
Amazing piece loved the whole update teasing arnav and confused khushi hahahahaha..gud job
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Posted: 13 years ago
what an index 👏👏👏👏👏 great idea

awesome update!!! woww arnav played along with the lie and was pulling her leg by calling her and asking about the little one 🤪
finally he told about the truth... and then she slapped him and wanted a baby from him now 😲
upon all that lavanya held all this conversation betweeen arnav and khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow ,what an amazing update and this khushi is so confusing,pm me with update and thx for the wonderful SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am speechless wow what a twist love it...I really like the teasing Arnav lol he was really hilarious...the way he teased her...and you closed the loop hole how he came there and open another one - he had her number from Nk or Nk and Akash also don't have any idea about girl- or they are just pretend that they don't know about them...

Anyway thanks to Samiya because of her such a beautiful, adventurous(till now Khushi going through)and a romantic, revenge of La(only time will reveal upto now its friendship) SS came...Enjoyed every bit...

Thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the index !
The part was so good .. I choked on the water I was drinking at the end. Lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
This SS is getting better with each update. I loved each of them and am eagerly waiting for the next every time.


Arnav played along till he coulnd not take it. He is falling for her and vice versa. And how Khushi confessed him that she was thinking about him all the time in one breath.
It was sweet, how she looked at herself in the mirror, and secretly imagined how it would look to carry their baby.

I think lavanya has heard their conversation,it will be awkward moment when Arnav and khushi will realise it. How will khushi behave towards Lavanya?

Thanks for PM Samiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update... Arnav cudnt have been able to see her so tensed and thats why the truth.. Hope this doesnt affect Khushi and La's friendship.. Khushi wanted the apple of their eye.. Oh my.. Anyways the time isnt gone, like he said all his apples will come from her tree only.. 🤣 I seriously love the way you write, Saiyeda.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
The last part cracked me up...
seriously I did not expect Khushi to say that..
Now I can't wait to see Lavanya's reaction...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
loved it loved it
awesome update
arnav knowing the truth and yet going along with khushi's thinking
loved they spent time on the phone getting to know each other

the kiss - nice touch
but loved when khushi said "why didn't you sleep withe me? i wanted our baby."
both are falling in love with each other.
can't wait to read the next part

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