FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158) - Page 44

Originally posted by: pri3love

I love rains...it brings out the romantic side of me. I have wonderful memories of rain, alone and with the special one. I am in love with this update. There is so much excitement on both Arnav and Khushi's parts on receiving the reply. It is so heart warming to see how Khushi felt the pain through the letter. Her reply was like the rainbow after the rain. I really lile the way you have used notebook pages to show both the letters. I was reading the update on iphone and tried hard to read Arnav's letter (coz the image was not zooming), only to realize later that you have written the lines again. lol.
I have so much to comment on this update. Will be back soon.

Thanks for the PM. Your updates makes me so happy these days and I hope that we will relive some more of Arshi before they fade away. 😊

Originally posted by: panck

Smitzy,

Hats off to you for writing a fab update, the work you put into (not just the writing, the pictures but the letters too_ it is so so apparent ' great job.

Now to the update ' I loved how the one reply gave Arnav hope, brought him from the edge of despair to the nostalgia of good times and then hope for the future.

Truly brilliant

Update soon

Cannot wait to read more..

Thnks Panck! I'll continue putting up the letters as pictures to give it a more authentic feeling 😊 I'll update regularly dear.. thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: hilly

This update is just beautiful , soothing and just heart touching !
Khush is a angelic light that is starting to bloom in Arnav's life .. who surely needs that re-assurance time to time, filled with hope and the rmbrence of that there's no storm without a rainbow..

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I'm loving the updates and glad I caught back on them.. it's thoroughly really well written, I'm hooked. Love the concept and will help both of them, esp. Arnav to overcome his painful and traumatic present which has now turned into a matter of past.

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101 letters, seem like a lot .. but I'm just as excited .. and hopefully the letters would grow longer in length, and still beautiful. but these show start offs do hold such great meaning as well.

Originally posted by: vtan

I came across your FF and read all the parts on one go and especially today's update. It sounds so peaceful and serene to see the letter exchange between them both. Absolutely loved it !!!

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

I must say that the characters you have picked out only enhance the story's plot that much more. It was difficult for me to imagine Barun Sobti as the young man, Sanaya Irani was no problem since she has a youthful face and I LOVE LAVANYA's epic expression! LOL! Brilliant job in depicting the characters with their core personalities. I must say that the last update had me in tears because its so hard to imagine when no one is comforting you because you said you want to be left "alone". Its surprising how Khushi's character seem to be so matured in her letters yet she is a jubiliant child outside of paper. Jalebi is definitely a healer for A in many ways :) My favorite line was :

Arnav slowly got up from the step and eased the door open leading to the balcony adjacent to the clock tower. He noticed it was still raining. Slowly, he extended his hand outwards to meet the steady drizzling. The raindrops felt cool against his skin, almost soothing.

Originally posted by: blahblah16

aww!!! This chapter was perfecccto!

Loved it! So well-written. Both the letters made so much sense and had so much going on, the deep meaning.

Loving this story... this young Arnav and Khushi and the way you portray their thoughts, very real.

I feel bad for poor Arnav...I'm glad Khushi's letter finally helped him.

Very very well written chapter.

Please do update soon... please please?

Originally posted by: khusiarnav

Hi there.. M ur new reader!! Read it in one go...
Have to tell u.. I just loved it!!
Pen pal thingy is cute... I adore this khusi!!
Lovely story concept... Keep up the good works dear...
Keep writing!!