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Posted: 12 years ago
wooow, that was so beautiful!!! i loved both letters..arnav's letter was really sad, i'm so happy khushi could comfort him..!!
ps: it's raining right now at my place 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Khushi's response was sooo honest and hopeful...i am glad she decided on the penpal intiative 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love rains...it brings out the romantic side of me. I have wonderful memories of rain, alone and with the special one. I am in love with this update. There is so much excitement on both Arnav and Khushi's parts on receiving the reply. It is so heart warming to see how Khushi felt the pain through the letter. Her reply was like the rainbow after the rain. I really lile the way you have used notebook pages to show both the letters. I was reading the update on iphone and tried hard to read Arnav's letter (coz the image was not zooming), only to realize later that you have written the lines again. lol.
I have so much to comment on this update. Will be back soon.

Thanks for the PM. Your updates makes me so happy these days and I hope that we will relive some more of Arshi before they fade away. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I came across your FF and read all the parts on one go and especially today's update. It sounds so peaceful and serene to see the letter exchange between them both. Absolutely loved it !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smitzy,

Hats off to you for writing a fab update, the work you put into (not just the writing, the pictures but the letters too_ it is so so apparent – great job.

Now to the update – I loved how the one reply gave Arnav hope, brought him from the edge of despair to the nostalgia of good times and then hope for the future.

Truly brilliant

Update soon

Cannot wait to read more..

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a fabulous update...
Arnav's despondency ...in his letter ...was heartbreaking . and Khushi's reply was so simple and heartwarming...
This story is going so beautifully ...the letters were amazing ...though 'A' seems to have quite a legible and neat handwriting here...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi and backing off? No way. She indeed is a beacon of light. Well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update is just beautiful , soothing and just heart touching !
Khush is a angelic light that is starting to bloom in Arnav's life .. who surely needs that re-assurance time to time, filled with hope and the rmbrence of that there's no storm without a rainbow..
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I'm loving the updates and glad I caught back on them.. it's thoroughly really well written, I'm hooked. Love the concept and will help both of them, esp. Arnav to overcome his painful and traumatic present which has now turned into a matter of past.
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101 letters, seem like a lot .. but I'm just as excited .. and hopefully the letters would grow longer in length, and still beautiful. but these show start offs do hold such great meaning as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I must say that the characters you have picked out only enhance the story's plot that much more. It was difficult for me to imagine Barun Sobti as the young man, Sanaya Irani was no problem since she has a youthful face and I LOVE LAVANYA's epic expression! LOL! Brilliant job in depicting the characters with their core personalities. I must say that the last update had me in tears because its so hard to imagine when no one is comforting you because you said you want to be left "alone". Its surprising how Khushi's character seem to be so matured in her letters yet she is a jubiliant child outside of paper. Jalebi is definitely a healer for A in many ways :) My favorite line was :
Arnav slowly got up from the step and eased the door open leading to the balcony adjacent to the clock tower. He noticed it was still raining. Slowly, he extended his hand outwards to meet the steady drizzling. The raindrops felt cool against his skin, almost soothing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update was so beautiful and serene.😊
Khushi is giving him hopes.I wish he takes it in a good way😊
Each letter has such great meaning.
Very well written.

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