FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

What an emotional update. Love it, trust Khushi to want to personalise it with a name and not a number ...the length to me does not matter it's the quality if your writing that is important to me! Thanks for the update !

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Feeling so sad for arnie. Yes in these type of situation u can know Who r ur friends for real.
Awating for more n more letters

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

emotional one.. feel soo bad for arnav... the first letter has reached!!! waiting to see how khushi will be his support & brings him out of this... wonderful!!

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

I am loving this FF story, each update layers more of who Arnav is and Khushi are. My heart breaks for Arnav and what he is suffering. At his ages he should be thinking about nothings but girls, music, movies and sports. He has already begun to feel abandoned and starts building walls around his heart. I am hoping that Khushi's letter will give a little joy that someone is there for him. Thank you for update and pm.

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beyonddarkness

@beyonddarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

gr8 update👍🏼

now a distraughted arnav will hav shoulder to lean on ...his jalebi

looking forward for arnav's reply to this letter

thnx 4 pm😊

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

nice update. feels sorry for arnav

updt soon

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

beautiful FF. I wish some of the FF writers here would get together and write scripts for TV. The TRPs would go through the roof. You write really well. and I love the way you portray their emotions. And the paradox of their situations- Khushi with Lavanya and poor Arnie who lost his fan club because of the sins of the father.

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Iamyself

@Iamyself

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Amazing update! Though its a little bit too short! :P

I love how the letter reaches Arnav at the right time. Especially when he has no one with him! (Y)

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asr13

@asr13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Smitzy !!!

Powerful update ...my heart goes out to the boy ..sorry young man today ...awww !!😭🤗

You've explained the situation he is in very well, how it feels to be dejected when you've been social all along and have had people wanting to come and be your friend ..and now this ...awww !!😕 Typical teenage boy, wanting to hide his grief, putting on a pretence of I-can-handle-it , hating the sympathy ...awww I've seen it before ...beautifully written !!👏

...no wonder he cried when he read Jalebi's letter ...you might have a lot of friends and not need me ...you can tell me anything that you cannot talk to your friends about ...aww hope it gets to share some of his grief ...talking helps !!! 😳

Very interesting concept Smitzy ...I am quite intrigued now with what he is going to write back ... Trust you to give us an exciting roller-coaster journey with 101 letters ...

Mwaah xxx🤗

PS - very pleased youre making this an FF ...sounds very promising, and with you behind it, trust you to keep me hooked !!! 3-3 FF sath sath ...wah kudiye tussi toh chhha gaye !!! 👏

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panck

@panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Smitzy,
What a touching update, makes me feel so sorry for the "cherubic" Arnav, though I find it almost impossible to imagine him as such.
His fall from grace because of the tragedy seems so realistic.
Wonder what alias he is going to choose. Khushi's was very khushi-like.
I cannot wait to read what he writes to her about.

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