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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
SUPER DUPER AWESUM STORY 👍🏼
i wonder, how come i never read this story before...😲😆😳
hmmn...now i get it...cozz i got busy in my exams preparation tht s why i dint get the chance to read this mindblowing story...
newys, as now i have read it...
must say andy you have done a great job... really liked ur story. alot👏👏
loved to see manveer in completely opposite avatar...😉
nd the precap is just looking forward to ur next update.
but i dont want uday to be a puppet dancing on manyts tunes...😔😆
i want uday to show mAnyta, what sort of person he is nd what he is capable of...so tht she never think s of messing with him again or ever make fun of him being poor...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

PM PM PM PM...
I'LL PAKKA READ IT REGULARLY. I DONT RED 2ND SHADOW SO REGULARLY I NOE, BUT I'LK PAKKA READ DIS. THANX 4 SECND SHADO PM.

thank you and will sure pm you😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm Precap was just OMG manyata kaya cheez hai

thanks dear😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Hey andy loved reading your ff do pm me whenever u update

thank and will sure pm you😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

SUPER DUPER AWESUM STORY 👍🏼

i wonder, how come i never read this story before...😲😆😳
hmmn...now i get it...cozz i got busy in my exams preparation tht s why i dint get the chance to read this mindblowing story...
newys, as now i have read it...
must say andy you have done a great job... really liked ur story. alot👏👏
loved to see manveer in completely opposite avatar...😉
nd the precap is just looking forward to ur next update.
but i dont want uday to be a puppet dancing on manyts tunes...😔😆
i want uday to show mAnyta, what sort of person he is nd what he is capable of...so tht she never think s of messing with him again or ever make fun of him being poor...😳

thanks nira now manyata is bold in this ff
the precap is for coming chapters only
uday wont be a puppet dancing to m's tunes
but presently his hand are tied so he has to control but one day he would explode
that is sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Chapter 5

Manyata looked at that fuming figure leaving the room. She smiled at him, and told to herself

"Uday your appointed here as my PA. 😈Now it would be real fun to work for me.

Tomorrow by 8 30 am you will be present in this office and I will make sure of it. Mr Uday sinha"

Mr Shanker enters the office at that time and sees a smiling manyata

S:" so beta your happy with that person. Shall we type the appointment order?"

He was the senior most official in that office and knew manyata since she was a baby. Manyata used to come to this office right from her kinder garden age. Mr shanker used to play with her and as years passed taught her the basics of business. So he was a mentor for her, a guide in her business world. He even had the freedom to call her beta

M: uncle I think he is ok after all you selected him from that bunch of candidates he is bound to be good. But he needs to be polished really well to be a perfect business man. How is his background uncle?

S: ok beta, your right. He mentioned something about his father admitted in the hospital for a bypass surgery and he needed money for the treatment

M: oh I see, now don't you think uncle we need to pay his medical expenses from our medical fund as we consider our employees like one family. I think we should pay the full amount for him. Isn't it fair uncle?

S: I can see a sharp business deal behind that decision, yes manyata uday is a good investment for our company. ok I will send the check to the hospital immediately

He soon left the office and manyata thought

"I am going to buy your brains uday for my company. And your gona spend the remaining days of your carrier toiling for me and my company. I assure you that. This is my word uday sinha"

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Uday was calling to his classmate vinod outside the hospital

U: hi vinod , how is life going on?

V: good uday , actually iam enjoying life, its nice all cash and hot chicks for your convenience. Really this is life

U: eh vinod can you lend me about 2/half lakhs for my father's surgery?

V: what 2/half lakhs, actually uday I have a loan to pay so I don't think I will be able to lend you any how about you ask sujit or shyam, they are well off than me and they will surely help you . gotta go catch you later

And he cut the phone

Uday had being trying to contact his friends since morning when he left from manyata's office, but till now no one even agreed to lend him a rupee to help him, they boasted about their lives, but backed of citing one one troubles when he asked for help

He had to see the doctor and ask him to postpone the surgery for about six days. Maybe by that time he could make this huge amount of 5 lakhs

He reached the doctor's cabin and knocked it

"Come in" came a reply

U: dr I wanted to see you to tell…………

Dr: yes yes even I wanted to see you . Your father's surgery was fixed for today afternoon , but since we received the amount ,we started it soon and so you have to sign this paper, it is just hospital formalities

U: but what about the money?

Dr: your company paid it

U: what? my company ?😲

Dr: yes Devgarh group of companies. We received their check 2 hours ago. Here is it

Uday looked at the check. It was signed by manyata.

Now what was her plan, 😡paying the hospital fees and asking the doctors to operate his father before he could reject it. It was a trap. He needed to find a way out

Dr: sign these papers uday

Uday was still shocked that he did not notice he had signed a blank paper in addition to the papers he signed for the hospital

He left the room. he did not notice a person had entered the doctor's cabin and collect that blank piece of paper

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Uday was speaking to rahul who had come to visit him and told him today's incidents

R: so now this is the case she appointed you in the company

Did you sign any papers in there?

U: no

R: good

U: I think I need to visit her once

R: don't do any thing in a hurry, you know her well

U: I know her well but she does not know who iam . I will show her that

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Guys this is chapter 5 and chap 6 will come really soon if possible today

So how was it?😃

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Will send pm after the 2 chapters

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Chapter 6

Uday was fuming as he walked the way to manyata's office.

How dare she give him charity. He would repay each paisa she had given as a help

He knew her very well right from college days. She was such a b**ch

Never missed any chance to insult him

"Stop here and

state your business" said the security guard

u: iam uday just came to see your manyata mam

guard: do you have an appointment?

u: no, but……..

g: sorry sir I cant let you in without any appointment

u: but I need to see her now

g: no you cant go

saying this he pushed uday, uday who was already irritated fumed with anger and hit him

the guard fell down, he whistled and soon the place was swarming with guards, some armed

they started to hit uday when

"stop this" came a voice😲

The guards left uday. He saw mr shanker at the door

s: what is all this ? why is all this confusion?

Guard 1: sir this fellow tried to enter the office forcefully

Guard 2: he hit the guard standing at the door

Guard 3: call the police

S : he looks at the person who created this confusion and exclaimed" uday. Why all this unruly behavior I expected much better behavior from you😲

U: iam sorry sir, I just came to see manyata

S: ok come with me. I will see if she is free. Now level your dress and comb your hair you look like a villain in a bollywood movie, did the guards hit you nicely, I should warn them not to repeat this behavior

U: it's ok sir, they just did their job

Uday sits in mr shanker's cabin and touches his cheeks it was bleeding

His whole body was sore. The guards really did know their job

Mr shanker entered the cabin and told him manyata would see him now

As uday walked towards the door of manyat's cabin he tried to calm himself. He needed to find out what was her plan. He waited for a second outside the door and knocked

"come in" came a sweet voice

Her voice may be sweet but not her mind, thought uday

As he entered he saw manyata resting on the sofa, her dress was now above her knees and her cream, smooth legs was clearly visible . her eyes were closed. Her lips too desirable. The neck of the dress stopped a liitle above her breast. Uday's heart skipped a beat. He had seen manyata in college but she never was this SEXY or HOT. Or did he fail to notice

She just looked too beautiful.😳 But a small part of his mind warned him that this damsel was just an external beauty but rotten inside. He must not forget all that she made him suffer. Uday cleared his throat.

"ehemm"

M: without opening her eyes, yes

U: I wanted to ask you when I was appointed in your company.

M: today, after the interview silly😆

U: so I came to tell I am resigning

M: you can't

U: I know, that money you paid will be returned to you soon, I don't need any of your money.ah, thanks for helping me in my need but I don't need it now

Manyata opened her eyes and got up. She moved gracefully towards uday

M: oh, do you think you could repay me the entire amount?

U:I don't 'think' that I can pay, I am sure that I would pay you every single paisa

M: I like this uday, this rebellious behavior from your side

U: don't😡

Manyata notices uday was beaten

M: uday what happened? I mean all this decorations on your dress. So finally did you feel you don't need to even dress decently. Or is this the characteristic of middle class people?

Uday was already back to his angry young man mode, thanks to manyata's irritating talks

All that insults she showered at him in the past including this day came to his mind, his eyes became blind with rage, and his conscious mind did not even register what he did next

He pushed her towards the wall and pinned her there. His whole weight was crushing her. His hands were holding her arms really tight that it was paining her like hell

Manyata cried with shock and fright

M: uday leave me, please😕

U: you want me to leave you, no never. Don't you want to insult me? Come on insult me😡

Every time we meet you insult me like I am some sort of creep who is begging for charity

Manyata I am not, it has passed the breaking point, and it's high time you learn to give me some respect

I am a man not a sissy who fears the society and the high class. What is the use of being a high class person when your thoughts are worse than cave man, manyata you have being hurting my male ego for a long time

Again I am warning you don't repeat it, or I won't be this soft

It that clear manyata? Is that clear?

He left her hands and pushed her back,he was about to leave the office when manyata called him

M: uday one minute😳

U: I don't have the time

M:just read the blue file placed on the table. Please

Uday decides to check what it was while manyata returns to her chair and massages her hands where uday held her tightly

Uday took that letter and read it. It was some contract

The body read this way

"This is to certify that I, uday sinha, s/o harilal sinha agree to sign a bond with devgarh group of companies for the next 5 years. During these years I would never leave the company for another job

I also agree to these conditions, if broken I am ready to face legal action

1) One- third of my salary would be given to me and the rest would be used to finish my loan that I borrowed from the company for my fathers treatment

2) I will not resign from the company in these years

3) I am ready to work from 8 30 am to 7 30 pm everyday and even more hours if my job requires so

4) If I behave badly towards the female staff I am ready to face legal action

5) I will leave the company only after my loan is paid fully

It was sighed uday sinha. The sign surprised uday. it was his sign, genuine sign

He was sure that he did not sign any documents from there. Then how did they get this document

Oh his head was aching. He looked at manyata questioningly

Manyata was ready to enlighten him

M: uday this is the contract you signed with the company, don't you understand English or should I explain each line to you

U: no, but this sign😲

M: sit uday I will explain. Did not you sign some documents today at the doctor's place? Since you left here in a hurry today morning without signing your contract I decided to sent the paper to the doctor and he collected your sign

U: what!! This is cheating; you can't scare me using this piece of paper.

M: yes uday I can uday. You know our company has a policy to help our employees during any financial crisis, but since you are a man with self respect (stressing each word especially the last 2) I decided that you would feel insulted if we pay half the amount, so we paid the whole amount as loan, and that amount would be taken monthly from your salary.

See no charity in this case, are you not happy uday

A call came for manyata, she spoke for about 1 minute and looked at uday

M: the hospital called, your father's surgery is over, now he is stabilized. So you can spend the time today with your father. I expect you to join tomorrow at 8 30 sharp at my office. I don't like any sort of delays. It is clear Mr Uday sinha?

U: yes manyata

M: and cal me mam or madam, I am your boss now

U:yes mam

Uday was shocked on how he was cleverly trapped in this deal, manyata like a spider weaved the web cunningly and he fel into it trapped, as if he could finish his loan in 5 years. Yes, he was trapped here for eternity

If only he was careful while signing that document In the doctor's office. Yes he sealed his fate

There was no way out

M: you can leave uday

As uday was about to leave manyata called him. She was massaging her hands. Her face was really cold and serious

M: one minute uday . if you ever ever repeat this sort of behavior to me again, I will put you in jail for eternity. A simple case of rape is enough to put you in jail, so uday tomorrow 8 30 sharp😈

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so guys updated chapter 6

how was it?

Do you like our EVIL manyata and our innocent uday

Waiting for your feedback

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Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
The update was very super duper
Loved each and every part of it
The dialogues
The mind game was perfectly written
Wow manyata is Evil and I like that's
Uday here is not that powerful nut he is still the best
Loved the whole thing
Keei it up
Please please update super soon
I beg on u
Sorry can't like now using my phone
Will like it later for sure
Love u muah
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
superb update andy gr8 work dear👏
urghhh...manyata is such a bitch😡
awsomee...love it from bottom of my heart
plzz..update next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
hawww...chapter 6 to hai he nai,,,i wanted to read it😭
ok enough of my melodrama...😆

newys,,,,chapter 5 was again great piece of work andy..👏
... i just loved it alot specially this evil nanyta😉
nd our swwet innocent UDAY 😕
oh no,,,uday as sweet nd innoent,,,digest nahi hota yaar😆
but i know, as of now uday cant do anything as he is bound coz of his father but soon he will show his so called boss tht she has messed with wrong person...
nd thts just gonna be really intense nd beautiful,,,hayye😳

plz update next chapter soon andy,,,i m waiting fr it...😳

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