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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey andy 😊

Chap-13 ws really a rocking nd smashing chap. Enjoyd it to bits.👏 👏
I really loved unnati nd giri conversation. giri is such a loving nd understanding fathr to unnati nd also a caring nd loving husbnd. m really excitd fr uday-giri meeting.
But, i hv to say one thing the highlight of dis update ws manveer conversation. This part ws the most fav part of .mine of the entire chaptr.
it ws supr hilarious. Lolz.bt in a cute nd utterly sweet manner.
D way uday figured out hw manyt ws so keen nd curious to knw everything abt lara nd thn hw he tricked manyta into his talks ws funny yt adorable.
Poor manytA, shd ws getting jealous of uday's closeness to a dog...hahahaha
u really did a commendable job andy in writing manveers dialogue.
Finally one understanding is cleared. I hope the other one also gt cleared soon.
Now,m reallh waiting fr the next chap. As its gonna be tht chap wherein manyta is going to seduce uday. 😳 right andy. waiting fr the next chapter impatidntly.
Rest of the update ws really mindblowing.
Update next chap ASAP.
Sorfy fr the late cment
Huggs
Saloni😳
Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

PROMO

Uday reached the rajmahal on time. As he entered the palace, unknown to all, avantika's fingers twitched. It was her first sort of movement in 16 years. A mother's heart can sense the presence of her child no matter what the distance between them and it too happened to avantika. A lone tear escaped from her eyes.😭

*****************

Un: dada, dad is waiting for you in the study, he wants to talk to you in private

U: why unnathi?😲

Un: I don't know. He said he wanted to have some man to man talk with you

******************

G: come in beta, please sit down

U: but maharaj..😕

G: uday beta, please call me uncle. Maharaj sounds too formal. After all you are my daughter's 'dada'😊

U: ok maharaj, I mean uncle

G: so tell me the truth, as a father I want to know what is happening between you and unnthi. She says you are like a brother to her, but what about you, do you feel the same way about her or do you love her?

U: uncle😲 (shocked)I can never ever think of unnathi in that way, she is like my sister to me. Uncle I know my social status and I can never think ever in that way even if she ever feels that way to me

*********************

Un: this way my udayveer dada, when he was 4 years old, see the picture, my dad said that he refused to wear the shirt dad had brought for him because it was not bhabhi's favorite color and dad punished him and made him stand facing the wall, shirtless. Mom found it amusing and clicked the pic, see how he was showing his tongue to mom, he was so naughty

Uday was not listening to her talks. His eyes were at the scar at the boy's back.😕 He too had a scar at the same place on his back. Unknowingly his fingers traced the scar on his back. He thought of what his baba had told him about it

***************

Manyata had never known defeat and was not ready to accept it easily. So now lara fiasco was over, her misunderstandings cleared, so the only thing left was to seduce uday. It was simply a challenge and she would crack it. after all she was one desirable lady.😳

*****************

M: um, uday I think you should phone your baba that you would be late tonight; we need to draft the deal with the Mehata's tonight itself

U: yes mam

M: uday call me manyta, did not I tell you that before.

She said seductively😳

*************

Manyta changed into a tight top and leggings, her neck was really deep and it really did a poor job of covering her chest. But she was not bothered by it. Only both of them were left in the office-the predator and the prey. She sat on the sofa and asked uday to sit. As he was busy taking notes, she put her pen down purposely and looked at him, he bend down to pick it and at the same time she too bend to pick it up. Their fingers brushed each other, uday looked up only to see manyta staring at his face, an unknown feeling in her eyes

Duk, duk😳 their heart beats raced as they shared an eye lock

******************

She sat on the bed and was wearing a very transparent nightie. She looked at him in a romantic manner and got down from the bed and moved towards him. As she walked towards him, he gulped down the saliva that formed in his mouth seeing this delicious creature in front of him. she was simply looking heavenly☺️

She came forward and took his hands in hers 😳and looked at him with love

M: uday, I really ………

*****************

So this brings us to the end of the promo

So how was it? good or stupid

I will be updating it on april 1

Do like and comment please.

It really encourages me

Do tell me what you feel about how the story will progress from here

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

Hey andy 😊 hi saloni😃

Chap-13 ws really a rocking nd smashing chap. Enjoyd it to bits.👏 👏ahh!! thanks os much saloni😃
I really loved unnati nd giri conversation. giri is such a loving nd understanding fathr to unnati nd also a caring nd loving husbnd. m really excitd fr uday-giri meeting. even i am looking forward for it😃
But, i hv to say one thing the highlight of dis update ws manveer conversation. This part ws the most fav part of .mine of the entire chaptr.
it ws supr hilarious. Lolz.bt in a cute nd utterly sweet manner.
D way uday figured out hw manyt ws so keen nd curious to knw everything abt lara nd thn hw he tricked manyta into his talks ws funny yt adorable.it was manyata who always made fun of uday and made him work like a slave, so i thought why not have a change? a tit for a tat😆
Poor manytA, shd ws getting jealous of uday's closeness to a dog...hahahaha so what will happen when he ever become close to a real lady?
u really did a commendable job andy in writing manveers dialogue.thanks again😃
Finally one understanding is cleared. I hope the other one also gt cleared soon. not so soon, it will take some time for that to clear😆
Now,m reallh waiting fr the next chap. As its gonna be tht chap wherein manyta is going to seduce uday. 😳 right andy. waiting fr the next chapter impatidntly.ya right, but i think the chap may become a bit to long
Rest of the update ws really mindblowing.
Update next chap ASAP.on april 1
Sorfy fr the late cment no problem at all
Huggs
Saloni😳

thanks so much saloni, for this lovely comment
i really loved it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks so much😃
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

sexyyy promooo andyyy

thanks so much huma😃
but promos can be really deceiving,😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eeks ... that was amazing!!!
Loved it , loved it and loved it😳.

I wish it was already my birthday,
... so that we could get the update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Eeks ... that was amazing!!!

Loved it , loved it and loved it😳.

I wish it was already my birthday,
... so that we could get the update😃

ahh!! thanks so much navi😃
but i did tell you before, manyta's challenge may not really end in the way you want😆
promo's can be really decieving😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
res..
paka 5 mins mey unres karti hu...


unres😃😃
see 2 ppost below...
niche post kiya hai...😆😆
sorry 😭😭

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳😳

hey andy baby...😃😃
hope u remember me...😉
aaj bohot dinno baad
m commenting on ur thread...

it feels good...😃😃
nw bohot dinno baad kar rahi hu na comment...

so thoda differently no in my usual style...😉😉

comment starts...

PROMO

Uday reached the rajmahal on time. As he entered the palace, unknown to all, avantika's fingers twitched. It was her first sort of movement in 16 years. A mother's heart can sense the presence of her child no matter what the distance between them and it too happened to avantika. A lone tear escaped from her eyes.😭


hayyee akhir kar ek Maa ka Dil hai..

apne bete ko Pehchaan he lega...😳😳

*****************

Un: dada, dad is waiting for you in the study, he wants to talk to you in private

U: why unnathi?😲 bechare Uday ke hava tight...(Terence Lewis style)

Un: I don't know. He said he wanted to have some man to man talk with you

******************

G: come in beta, please sit down

U: but maharaj..😕

G: uday beta, please call me uncle. Maharaj sounds too formal. After all you are my daughter's 'dada'😊

U: ok maharaj, I mean uncle

G: so tell me the truth, as a father I want to know what is happening between you and unnthi. She says you are like a brother to her, but what about you, do you feel the same way about her or do you love her?

U: uncle😲 (shocked)I can never ever think of unnathi in that way, she is like my sister to me. Uncle I know my social status and I can never think ever in that way even if she ever feels that way to me


Waah kya Answer hai...👏👏

Maharaj Giriraj kuch zyada nahi sochte...😡😡😆

Unnati usse "Dada" bulati na ki "Handsome"..."Hotiee" ki un donno pey

shak kare...

very Bad Maharaj Giri...


*********************

Un: this way my udayveer dada, when he was 4 years old, see the picture, my dad said that he refused to wear the shirt dad had brought for him because it was not bhabhi's favorite color and dad punished him and made him stand facing the wall, shirtless. Mom found it amusing and clicked the pic, see how he was showing his tongue to mom, he was so naughty

hayyeee kitna Cute..aur naughty haii Chotu Uday..

So sweet...⭐️⭐️

awww usne Shirt sirf isliye nahi pehna kyunki woh Princess ka Fav colour nahi tha..😳😳

waah kya Pyaar hai..👏👏

bachpan ka..☺️

Chotu uday shirtless kitna Cute hoga na..😕😕

par bada Uday Shirtless...😉😉

hayyyee kitna "Handsome"...aur "Hottt"...aur "Sexy"...😉😉😳

bas bas m out of Uday Shirtless Land...☺️🤣

Uday was not listening to her talks. His eyes were at the scar at the boy's back.😕 He too had a scar at the same place on his back. Unknowingly his fingers traced the scar on his back. He thought of what his baba had told him about it..

Hope yeh Uday as an indication le...😆😆

maybe perhaps a sign frm God...🤣

***************

Manyata had never known defeat and was not ready to accept it easily. So now lara fiasco was over, her misunderstandings cleared, so the only thing left was to seduce uday. It was simply a challenge and she would crack it. after all she was one desirable lady.😳

Hayyee yeh Manyata toh badi fast hai...😲😲😲

Killer attitude hai..jaise show mey Uday ka tha...😉👏

kya plan hai iss "Beatuy + Brains" ke????

nek toh nahi lagte...🤣😉😉

*****************

M: um, uday I think you should phone your baba that you would be late tonight; we need to draft the deal with the Mehata's tonight itself

U: yes mam

M: uday call me manyta, did not I tell you that before.

She said seductively😳..


Uday ko tough jane wala hai...😉

Good luck Uday..😳😳

enjoy Ur Sexy Bossies Seduction..☺️☺️

hope u survive it...😉😉


*************

Manyta changed into a tight top and leggings, her neck was really deep and it really did a poor job of covering her chest. But she was not bothered by it. Only both of them were left in the office-the predator and the prey. She sat on the sofa and asked uday to sit. As he was busy taking notes, she put her pen down purposely and looked at him, he bend down to pick it and at the same time she too bend to pick it up. Their fingers brushed each other, uday looked up only to see manyta staring at his face, an unknown feeling in her eyes

Duk, duk😳 their heart beats raced as they shared an eye lock


LLHH...hw romantic..😳😳

LLHH means (Look-Look-Hawa-Hawa)😳

******************

She sat on the bed and was wearing a very transparent nightie. She looked at him in a romantic manner and got down from the bed and moved towards him. As she walked towards him, he gulped down the saliva that formed in his mouth seeing this delicious creature in front of him. she was simply looking heavenly☺️


Uday toh gaya kaam se...🤢🤢

bechara...

but lucky Man...😉

She came forward and took his hands in hers 😳and looked at him with love

M: uday, I really '''


I really ...wat???😕

yeh promo khatam...😲

uuunnnaahh...😭😭

its cheating man...😡😡

chal aab jaldi update kar..😭😭

m waiting eagerly... 😃😃😉

*****************

So this brings us to the end of the promo

So how was it? good or stupid

Stupid not at all..😆

good naah😲😲

its Awesum..👏

jzzz Amazing...👍🏼

I will be updating it on april 1

waatt???😲😲

chal koi nahi mey bhi 1st april ko aarahi hu...😉😳

Do like and comment please.

done...😃

It really encourages me

aww so sweettt...😃

Do tell me what you feel about how the story will progress from here

hume kya pata..😕😕

Update karo phir pata chal jaayega...😉😉

phew khatam

main bohot pakaya na...

uske liye no Sorry...🤣🤣

bubye...



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