FF: D for Desire #2 (Ch 15 - 21)

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Nupur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

awww, that was such an amazing update :) you did justice to their feelings :) thanx for pm

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sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Wow am in second page...update is worth the wait...loved it...precap is awesome...hoping for an early update :))

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Thanks for d update!! It's fantastic! But why u took it so looong?

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laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

great update loved it. cont soon.

after a long gap was happy to read the chapter.

please cont soon.

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Hey!

That was beautiful. 😳

I really admire how Arnav is trying to distance himself a little in order for Khushi to trust him. Its not just about having sex and the physical needs and desires ... but with Khushi its much more than that. This is the first time something like this has happened to him and he is afraid ... afraid for himself, afraid he'll hurt her ... afraid to show his weakness.

Having said that he controlled his desires pretty damn well. As for talking about his family, he opened up to Khushi which was another first time experience for him. She gave him comfort when he was feeling low, perhaps weak, in pain ... At that moment, I don't think he could've asked for anything else.

A wonderful ending to this chapter.

As for the precap ... I'm looking forward to the next update. Please do try and make it sooon. Love this 🤗