SwaRon OS : Happy Realisations - Page 6

Loved this OS Pratik.

Lovely OS bro...
Beautifully written...
Surprised to see Swayam's new talent...singing...gud one...
Song selection was also excellent...
The song was perfect for Swaron...
Loved Sharon's confession...
Very happy to see Swaron together...they are meant to be together...
The OS was fantastic bro...
Hats off to you bro...
Loved the OS...
Hope that something like this happens in the coming episodes...

hey stop saying its bad

dude r u mad??? 🤪

Originally posted by: pratik54000

thanks so much for liking my efforts...i am so glad to read all the nice things that you wrote in the comment...well you indeed gave a comment of my life that i poses all this feelings in me...noone ever mentioned this for me so thanx for this...ya i will surely pm you next time...and i have a swaron ff going will surely pm you when i update that...

Okey...firstly sorry for being late...but dude what an os...!!! wow classy...i so wish ke Monday rather Tuesday k epi me aisa hi kuch dikhaye...tumhare muh me ghee shakker pade yaar...seriously...

so sry bhaiyya i have no time... to read today..but i will definitely read by tomorrow...
you will have to wait more for satu comment! 😉
till then
res 😊
so here goes the satu comment!! 😉
UNRES!!!!!!!!!
pratik bhai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️👏
the OS was one of my best!!
good job!!non non nooo GREAT SwaRon JOB BHAIYYA!!!
truly perfect title
the way you PREDICTED...mind blowing
so you made taani a better character here... 😆😊
oohh!so this swayam knows to play guitar n sing fantastically!! 😳
n the song made me 😳 hard!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Sharon was actually startlet by this song and suddenly all the memories of swayam and her started to come to her how both of them met...how she slapped him and how he was to her)

made me nostalgic too :')

(Tear started to roll down down her eyes as the words were forcing her to think all the cute things that swayam had done for her...all those gift...thats teddy with him on the rose day...how he used to simle to her and suddenly brought back to reality by his words dil toda)

:') tears were filled in my eyes!!

and when sharon finally spoke to him conveying all the feelings... n her realization of her TRUE LOVE!!
made me cry happy tears to the core... n smile hard...
loved the way u wrote sharon's lines...
n the BEST PART
was when swayam stopped her n said

Swayam: Don't you dare run away from me now... I will never allow you to leave me...not even if you wish... I have got my prized possession back and I will never lose it again...do you understanding this...don't you dare take a foot forward...

awww made me cry more :') :')
love SwaRon!!!loved this OS!!superb!!
beautifully written!! 👏⭐️
u r the 2nd person who made me cry through writings!!
how do you manage time to write!!??

Hey pratik,first of all,i am really sorry for being so late.and you know the reason...coming to the os,awesome yaar!Especially the song selection..personally i jus love this song.do write more...
Love tania:)

Originally posted by: pooja123456

cute post...i wish this would happen in real in the show!!!!
thanks for the pm...do write more!!!

thanks for liking the os...i am very glad to read the nice comment of yours...