FF: SHAMELESS Thread #4: Link to New Thread pg 1

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

What was that in the end???Payal...u serious?i could hav never tht abt her being in tis situation...
Lets c...hw u goin to take this story ahead...am waiting to kno who the figure is...i wont guess..as ur giving us lots of twists...
And that was a Hot SR...was blushing while reading each and every line...
Loved it...Thanks for the pm

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.OMG!!!!! No,i can't believe its payal.Arhi moments were awesome.

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

If its my last opt i never think it could be payal...ewww...
Bt cant believe it

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Azzmaira

@kookoo864

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

First, it was a beautiful chapter - the arnav khushi part. It was so nicely written, hats off!
Omg Payal has been sleeping with shyam?!!
Amazing chapter! Waiting for more, I wonder how khushi will react to all this...
Thanks for pm!

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Half way through the chapter I was sure that the person that the detectives and Aman had caught was Payal. I don't think that the figure is Payal. But I wonder what she was doing with Shyam...I just hope that things are all right with her.

A well written chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Keep up the good work.

BTW, your PM had the perfect pun for this chapter. I started laughing as soon as I read it! 😆