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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Ok last night i had a feeling tht u might update it n my instinct was so correct Tina i wish i had stalked it then i'll b able to comment on 1st page... Anyways rather b late than never... Loved the update... Shyam n payal ewww it was payal with shyaam... This was something we could never imagine. Now i think m not in a position to guess but tht fig is surely not payal or anjali. Akash could b but y? As for rainas all three were in another room when the fig asked doctor abt that venom... I dun know after seeing the payal twist i cant b sure for anything ... Awesome update loved it

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Preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

I've thought of Payal then Dia many times but i dont get the motive so i abandoned that theory - waiting to see what u have up ur sleeve in the next update!
Nutty Natasha and Demented Di are good enough for me 😆

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Hey fantastic chapter..it was Payal who slept with Shyam?may be she too traped...bt Mrs.Singh said that someone looking like Khushi right..is Payal exactly looking like Khushi?i think there is another one.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

I dont like to read too bold mature content dont feel it at ease. But the way u have written it... It was beautiful n i was sure for it

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-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Arnav-khushi's moments were awesome but Ewww payal with shyam eww eww EWWW

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

girl...u throw a crazy googly at the end..BEAUTIFUL< PASSIONATE AND JUST WELL WRITTEN!!! loved it..Tina , u re a writer par excellence...really want to to know the killer now...I can t believe jiji was sleeping with the creep ...eeewww...

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bubblz

@bubblz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Omg...
It cant b payal...
Cant wait 4 d nxt chapter...
Figure iz going 2 b revealed...
Wow...
Plzzz update sooon...

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Holy moly, that was PAYAL with Shayam!?!?!

Thanks for clearing who was having an affair with Shyam.I was dying to know who it was.😊

But being the writer you are with your never ending twists and turns in this story, I bet there's another twist coming up showing why Payal was with that psycho!!

I'm soo happy for Arnav and Kushi that finally they consummated their marriage.

I think I might have to read this FF again from the beginning to pick up all the subtle hints you've put in here and there in every chapter about the "figure", to see if I can figure it out before you reveal it in the next update.For the moment I think it's Anjali just cos she's the one with the most corrupted/twisted mind among the other characters!