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Asrkkgsr

@Asrkkgsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

great update.hot and interesting.i dont digest the fact that payal is their enemy.so many twist

thanks 4 pm😛

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

I am just gonna leave this here..

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Hey!

What a chapter! Woah! Hats off to you seriously!!! 👏

I mean the way in which you described the desire, passion and assurance that was passing between Arnav and Khushi was ufff ... sizzling, descriptive and heart felt. I say heart felt for one reason and one reason alone. Arnav asked again if Khushi wanted to go through with their wedding night and that just shows the love he has for her. What a man! 😳

To put his own desires to one side and attend to his wife whilst she is upset, frightened, tensed, confused is hard - but when your wife is truely beautiful and sexy, to control your desire to take her then and there is very hard and therefore what he did was commendable. 👏👏👏

What else can this dashing fella do that we haven't already read about ... he always seems to surprise me 😃

Then to read about Khushi's equal desire for Arnav, if not more was brilliant! I would've thought she'd be shy mostly, but it was a pleasant surprise reading that she matched his kiss, with her own and rightfully so.

OMDays!!!!!! I'm actually shocked 😲😲😲! Reading about a lady with Shyam wasn't too surprising, but then when that woman was caught and it was revealed to be Payal ... my mouth was hanging wideee open! Like what!!!??? Seriously Payal ... So does that mean her and Shyam were having sex ... maybe a fling, oh I don't know ... Anyway, I'm not sure what'll happen next. However I can say that I am extremely excited to find out soon!!! 😃

Please PM me the next update. Thanks!

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Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: ayshaomar
the last person on earth i would have expected that girl to be was payal
so payal sleeping with shyaam? or what? ewww
and finally we get to see who the mystery psychotic female is
i still find it hard to believe that it cud be payal but after this chapter i cant even say no now!!!!

great chapter finally they had their suhaagraat

yes she was with shyam🤢

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

i really need to appreciate your writing skills its amazing👏

what a chapter👍🏼

WHAT THE...😲

payal!!!!!! out of all people payal!!!!!!!!!!

payal slept with shyam??eeewww 🤢...

dude the romance was hot and passionate...iam sure it must have been a bit difficult to write the scenes...they finally became one...😳...awww arnav is controlling his desires and still asking if she is ready for it...such a sweetheart...

i still cant digest that payal slept with shyam...wait...she was wearing a sari right??how did she come out in a gown??

am very sure payal is not the figure...i remember clearly that in the before chapter it was mentioned that "the figure was watching payal take kushi upstairs"

i hope payal has a reason for what she did...whats wrong with her??...

finally you are going to reveal the figure...iam sure its either dia or natasha...

what happened to mental patient(anjali)??...something was happening to her right when arshi were escaping??

i am eagerly waiting for the next update...

lovely update...

thanks for the pm...

continue soon

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Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: LaxshaLOVEArshi
OMG OMG OMG OMG iT WOZZZ Payal ! I did Guess but still ...!!!! Can't wait 2 c next update
Comin to ArHi !

OMG OMG OMG it wozzz soo HOt and passionate man ! They finally become one !

The morning after scene is cute as well

aww so so glad u liked the chapter😃

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Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: aziii
Update please just cum bak frm wrk n read fro ur note... Im soo excited to read ur chapter keeping my opens for u to upload it...please do it quick have to wake up half six in morning...(",)

hope u liked it! good night!

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Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: Parisian
Such a romantic chapter ! Well written :) As for the figure, I'am pretty sure it's Natasha. I would be hella surprised if it's someone else. Also, did Payal actually slept with Shyam ?! :o Can't wait for the next chapter ! :D

yes she did🤢

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asdfjkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

That had to be the MOST unexpected twist so far! Payal is sleeping with Shyam? OMG I don't even know what to think right now. My mind has been blown!

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Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: meradil
omg from the beginning after you wrote about how she hid her face i kept thinking it was payal... but actually reading that it was her was like a 'wow, can't be' moment!!

i can't imagine her doing something like that...especially with shyam -- eww... but wait... you said she's in a gown... I remember reading that payal was in a sari! bc when water got spilt on khushi there was a line that said something about one of the few wearing a saree at the party...

this is like a big puzzle and my OCDness is keeping me frustrated because I can't put it all together since you have so many twists and turns.

ahhh keep it up!

and thanks in advance for the PM :p

ur right payal was in a sari in the gala but in gown later..this will be explained next chapter, no worries😊