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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

ergh Anjali really is mentally ill i mean who can imagine it for that long

So now it seems it might not ben Anjali o_O

I love how you're ruining my predictions;D I'm gonna love the surprise.

Aww Khushi wanted to be his but ofc not there

<3'd the precap, can't wait for the romance to begin!

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aafan

@aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

The way you wrote the kissing scenes before his surgery were so romantic.
I am not sure if u need to worry and double guess...

Have full faith in your writing!!!
Take your time and will wait for a long long real romantic chapter.

Thanks

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Tina

@TinaEskay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

REMOVED🥱

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Tina

@TinaEskay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

working on pms..*edit: done!

Edited by TINA! - 12 years ago

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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Ow you're going to update now.. soon =DD Yaaayyy!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

the last person on earth i would have expected that girl to be was payal

so payal sleeping with shyaam? or what? ewww

and finally we get to see who the mystery psychotic female is

i still find it hard to believe that it cud be payal but after this chapter i cant even say no now!!!!

great chapter finally they had their suhaagraat

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

OMG OMG OMG OMG iT WOZZZ Payal ! I did Guess but still ...!!!! Can't wait 2 c next update

Comin to ArHi !

OMG OMG OMG it wozzz soo HOt and passionate man ! They finally become one !

The morning after scene is cute as well

Edited by LaxshaLOVEArshi - 12 years ago

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aziii

@aziii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Update please just cum bak frm wrk n read fro ur note... Im soo excited to read ur chapter keeping my opens for u to upload it...please do it quick have to wake up half six in morning...(",)

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Parisian

@Parisian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Such a romantic chapter ! Well written :) As for the figure, I'am pretty sure it's Natasha. I would be hella surprised if it's someone else. Also, did Payal actually slept with Shyam ?! :o Can't wait for the next chapter ! :D

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meradil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

omg from the beginning after you wrote about how she hid her face i kept thinking it was payal... but actually reading that it was her was like a 'wow, can't be' moment!!

i can't imagine her doing something like that...especially with shyam -- eww... but wait... you said she's in a gown... I remember reading that payal was in a sari! bc when water got spilt on khushi there was a line that said something about one of the few wearing a saree at the party...

this is like a big puzzle and my OCDness is keeping me frustrated because I can't put it all together since you have so many twists and turns.

ahhh keep it up!

and thanks in advance for the PM :p

Edited by meradil - 12 years ago