SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

dt was sooo amazin..:):)👏👏👏👏juz tooo gud..none of dem wer at peace..bt none wntd 2 take d initiativ..he cudnt say sorry..n she wudnt move w/o his sorry..well well well..equals nw..d fragnance z back in d car..
bth notices each othr..
both r dressin 4 each othr evryday..
bt cnt make things norml..

d anger z back..
Jalebis..lol..dont remind me of dt..
shw ka scene ghum ra dimaag me mere ab..😆😆😆

she said evrythin abt Arnav 2 Arnav in sleep...lolnw he wud b knowin wt she was xpctin..isnt it?well..wer dey really goin 4 sum meetin or a date?i mean itti subeh meetin?haah..!!!Anjali was cute wid her teasin..:Dloved it..hope things gets back 2 nrmal in d nxt chptr..
..:)

doo pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛😛thnxx😊😊😊

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

awesome, superb, wonderful.

Loved it too much 🤗

Arnav! you are great, he find a way to have her in his car. Khushi, what can i say she is to funny, she really love him but she doesn't realised yet, or maybe she doesn't want to realise.

So they are going in a meeting together, let's see what Devy Maya has plenned for them, can't wait to read more.

Continue soon.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Arnav is so cute.. he is like a kid.. who would do anything to get his toy back.. LOL..

both dressing to impress..

awesome update..

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LoveRomance0

@LoveRomance0

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

I am in love...with this story.. I did not wish it to end, although to give u credit it was quite long. I cant wait for next update.

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LoveRomance0

@LoveRomance0

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

And Khushi with her hair open, ASR you dont know what is waiting for you next :)

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Shariqa_here

@Shariqa_here

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Hey Farah... really sorry about the late edit...a big comment for the make up from my side😉

As you know, its my crazy life style and a crazy ipad to add to that😆

Anyway...it was lovely to read the chapter on Khushi's POV.

You chapters are so close to the show that it does not require much effort to visualise👍🏼

Although I read your FF for your beautiful style of writing (not the story i.e. it could be anything and I will still read it) I still prefer Arnav's POV to Khushi's.

And no I'm not all over Arnav or anything like that😆 It is simply because Khushi is like an open book and her actions dont startle anyone. However Arnav is a mystery man and his action and words do startle us because his logic id sometimes hard to understand or digest😆

So yes Arnav's POV is what interests me the most in ur story😉

Edited by Shariqa_here - 12 years ago

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Bhooma01

@Bhooma01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

LOVED the update...Couldn't help but snigger a bit at ASR's plight...brought to his knees by the smell of lemons...MWWWAAAHHH...

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

loved it very nice update

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

awesome update... 🤗
khushi is totally crazy but a cute one...😊
both want to look best for each other... oh they are so in love😳
at atlast HIS lemon is back??

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

awww he got his lemon back. Great update loved the turmoil they both went through over the weekend. Really felt for Khushi when she was talking to her mom. Arnav was real cute when he was talking about impressing her. Wonder what will happen at this meeting if there really is one