SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

superb update, loving the way the story is turning out:)

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LoveRomance0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

I so love the Devi Maiyya bits in ur FF, she is so adorable 😊 and I was hoping that Arnav will kiss her when he backed her up against the wall towards the end, but I guess its a little too early for that 😉

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Divi!! 🤗

I am happy your monkeys liked what I wrote. 😃

"Let Me Finish" - hai, I still see him do it in my SKD. 😉 How can someone try to run away after that??

LOL .. I dont think I can update during this weekend. Have to update my FF too .. and I have a busy week ahead. 😭😭

Awww I'll get an update na,whether FF or SS,😉 no worries dii!!!😆 Me happy😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: kinjalcp87
oh my god khusi is teaching nice lesson to arnav

Originally posted by: hetalmkn
Awesome... this is too good...

Can't wait to read her side of it..

Originally posted by: sneha0504
loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much Girls! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: iritz

Farha...

Ahahhahahahah... For all the arrogance in him... the man is going crazy for her smell in his car !!! Absolutely loved it !!! And Ms. Gupta is giving him a pretty tough time... Awww...

I know... I know... u've been pretty busy... but then I am just plain, simple greedy... yeh dil maange more !!!! Jaldi Jaldi !!!

Ritz! 🤗

I am gonna start whining about my busy schedule over the PM ... 😉 Just wait .. 😛

Arrogant Mr. Raizada & toughie, toughie Ms. Gupta .. how I love their chemistry!!!

Thanks for saving L&L. 😆

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: shonagudia
Oho how i love this Khusi... Now Arnav will understand how it feels to taste his own medicine.😆
Arnav would have never thought someone will make him go mad like this. Gosh he's crazy thinking her smell would vanish from the car if she continues to avoid going with him..
Devi Maiya doing a perfect job...
Continue soon..

Hey There!

Thank you so much for the generous comment. This chapter was all about getting him crazy .. stirring a lot of things inside him that he runs away from .. This has impacted Khushi too but that I am willing to cover in the next chapter.

Thank you again! 🤗

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: A...
Excellent work... the title is so apt for the story n i luv this desperate Arnav n indifferent Khushi. I can't tell yu how much i liked this sweet n lemony story. plzzz plzzz update soon n a longer part than this one... gud luck!!!

Hi A! 😊

Thank you so much for liking this story. A longer chapter than this?? 😆 LOL .. I am gonna try but as soon as it passes 2000 words, my pace slows down. 😆

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: indi52
omoraboti,

got lost in the words and feelings and remembered arnav and khushi from the days gone by. beautiful understanding of the two, lovely scenes, read 3 and 4 together. five soon please. thanks so much.

Di!

When I was reading your post in the forum, I was thinking this should be a treat for you. 😊 You miss those days, naa? So do we .. they wont go back there ever but I hope they bring back the intensity.

Thank you so much for dropping by!! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path
Oh wow! I love this SS <33 I like how Khushi is so perfect for Arnav to handle 😆And am definitely glad for the torture she is giving him .. he so deserves to be a possessive jerk who's not able to understand his actions :P
Btw, I wonder if Khushi would be angry too when she comes out to know about La dating Arnav?!

Update soon :)

-V-

Hi V!

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Well .. a little spoiler for you .. Khushi wont be angry when she will learn about La. That wont be as per her character and also why should she be angry? But yes .. it will affect her .. 😊

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: chetanahooda
reser-wa!

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I loved the whole rush-through the day they did not talk...

Most of the scenes reminded me of the golden days of IPKKND...starting wale..It was so much fun!!!

Rushed coz of exams...chotu sa comment will make it up in the next update.

Love!

Chetana