SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Wow quick and awesome update.. Arnav was charging on her on issues that were not even issues.. Enjoyed reading it..

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: Annie12
lovely!!! it was superbly written with actual scenes from IPKKND interspersed with this story.

Hi Annie!

Thank you so much for the comment. 😊

I have tried to keep the characters intact here as per the show. So I will be using a few of their typical dialogues or attitudes here to define them better. I am happy you liked it. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: peepli
Great update...go khushi, give that arrogant raizada exactly what he deserves.. But I am sure, somewhere she too must be missing him..

It is very difficult to decipher Khushi. Even if she is missing him, she would think she have acidity! 😉

Thanks Peepli! 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: laksh65
very well written chapter, loved the way khushi is giving him silent treatment for yelling at her unnecessarily, and now asr is repenting, loved this update, waiting to read the next one.

Thanks dear! 😊 Not only for this comment but also for consistently keeping me inspired. 😊

Silent treatment always works! 😉

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: arnavbarun
awesome update!!!

devi maiyaa you rock...

do we get to know khushi's pov on the whole thing!!!

Thanks dear!

As of now, I am planning to write on her POV of the current matter and a bit more .. not the whole thing. it is too early! 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: PixieFlame
Loved the update! :)

Originally posted by: subiscs
loved the update ya!!!😊

Thanks Pixie & Suba! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: akshad
amazing

Originally posted by: vkp1989
Awosome update.

Thanks Girls!!! 🤗

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reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Hello There!! 😊

You are right dear. The previous two chapters set them up .. now we will get to see them in action may be. I am already feeling like rushing to the end as I have the last sentence ready. 😆

Khushi calls even Lakshmi - Lakshmi ji! 😆

Arnav does not even know what he is saying he is angry .. manipulation .. like really, Arnav??

Guess you will get what you asked for .. 😉 .. will be posting the next update soon inshAllah. 😊