SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

really loving this story!read all the chapter and they're all sooo

interesting!it would be great if you could please pm

me the future updates!😊

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

loved it do pm me for next update

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

anger ands jealousy get the worst out of him!

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

omg love it so now looks like khushi will be angry and wont ask a lift from him anymore anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

absolutely fabulous! keep it coming!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

Maybe I glanced at your dress and thought "meyetar jamata to shundor 😃"

no I meant in ugly betty I saw creative writing classes...in every county they have classes like this... they tell you to write 500/600 words and stuff...it's fun... plus I love competitions 😃

ami to BS ke niye akhono tension e asi... why the f did they show Khushi-NK 😕... Apu me seriously scared

yes bhulo na kintu... first pm will be mine 😃... ami lazyleaves r rasgulla r gulo teo amon kori

actually I have to...have to...have to... res first at stories I love

and lemons and limes are one of them 😃

LOL .. or may be I glanced at yours! 😆

Yeah .. I saw Ugly Betty. Our workshops were like that .. we were assigned to write on some topic within 800 words and then there would be discussion on each one's write-up. Learning through writing .. it was fun. But I dont think there is any formal setup for that ..

.. you keep writing here. You are really good! I like all your stories but your best written, to me, in terms of pace & stickiness, was Tornado-Volcano. 😊 Another one I really appreciate for writing style is Arisai.

Dont bother about BS .. if he leaves, we cannot stop him. But I will rely on Priya's words .. SP does not want this show off very soon since this earns them the highest revenue .. and everyone knows darling, IPK is nothing without BS. If he was replacable, they would not have allowed him the 40 day leave. So SP will not let him go easily .. they did not bother to keep Gia Manek but they compromised even with the story track, risking the TRP, to accommodate his long leave. So let's not worry .. 😊 .. This is a beautiful show .. one of a kind for SP .. a show that has drawn the younger crowd to this channel for the frist time. So they wont play dirty with it ..

Besides everything else, BS has his own career to focus on and I would be really happy for him if he gets into bigger venture .. He deserves so much more. He really is an amazing actor.

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: damonzlady
really loving this story!read all the chapter and they're all sooo
interesting!it would be great if you could please pm

me the future updates!😊

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim
loved it do pm me for next update

Thanks girls! Will PM you when I update next. 😊

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

amazing update...loved when asr got all jealous..wanna read more..plz update soon

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_G1234_

@_G1234_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

wonderfulll update...I am in love with this SS.. lol i really like the concept. its different...i was eagerly waiting for the 3rd part and finally u updated.. i was daily stalking.. lolzz Arnavji is JEALOUS.i hope arnav's PA leave get extend...soo we can get arhi romance.. :P