ArHi OS: In Khushi's Defence*Awarded*

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Superb os, u no wen I was initially reading it I thou it may have been a plan to get ASR to admit his feeling, but oh well Amans mother really is a horror and Aman a spineless fool, loved the way it ended.

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awww... It was a treat to read this one!😃

This happens normally na... like d gal is always asked to compromise for marriage n d stereotype how a gal shud be...

me being very much lik Khushi in hogging dancing minus cooking felt lik Arnav is speakin up for me...he he

thouroughly enjoyed...😊

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garlic

@garlic

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
My sister writes so well 😆

OS ka title meine diya. Mujhe credit nahi mila 😭

milega barabar milega...GABBAR STYLE😉

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garlic

@garlic

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

awesome dear...you are indeed a great writer. 👏

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Snehal

@madhumi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

OMG...my dear...tht ws smethin like readin betwn d lines evry1 knws d track nothin new wt d story yet u made d hidden persona of real storyline come out with a loveky glitter...u knw baby,u r smethn..hmm...knw wht..i wud luv to kp stalkin if u continued wt this writin piece of urs..m sure it owes a healthy storlyline thru d frame u luk at d story.. Hope u continue...:-*

n d line..."haw can a man who keeps khushi of his boss ovr his own khushi,vl take care of HIS khushi"...hehe..i must say gal..tht was d statement of d mileniun..rofl...:-D

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Aman's mom sounds like such a pain! and believe you me..i have seen such women and i detest them! And Aman is a crappy man! Believing Arnav coz he's his boss! chamcha kahi ka! 😆

I loved Arnav! I always do!

Loved the 4 phases of awkward silence..and the last part..the best! "You may leave"..ASR's parting shot! Loved it!

Awesome OS! 😊

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rrd29

@rrd29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Lovely...please continue...We want to read the next update of this cute love story

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OMG that was fantastic...
just loved it to bits...

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Priya

@LoveYouChutki..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow... Amazing dear... Frankly i was missing ur post badly... See today wen i saw ur post i gt big smile on my face... Thanx for d PM dear.. n plz update next part ASAP n dont forget to PM me... 😉