OS:His bride is waiting for him

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Jhalak29

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

I hope we get this tommo,,,

Its nicely written😊

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iisuperhumanii

@iisuperhumanii

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

This was on the end of the nicely written ff's on india-forums. well, my only suggestion is that to refrain form using text language while writing...it's like a pet peeve of mines. It just kind of takes away from the story.

So, you did very well portray Arnav's inner battle and it was done well. Lovely story and surely, do hope to see some of this in tomorrow's episode.

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Hoping this happens! If Arnav doesn't reach the Mandap on time,I'll be in a state worst then khushi if that's possible 😭

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Thank god Arnav chooses to go to Khushi...Dadi is so vicious...has she got no heart? Beautiful!

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Fantastic OS 👏👏
Love how you've interspersed his wonderful memories of her with Dadi's disgusting lines...loved it!!Hope it happens in the show also like this!

Edited by aditi07 - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

please please pray we get this tomorrow and he goes for his khushi loved how you incorporated their conversation and what was going on at that moment loved it awesome beautifully done thanks for the pm

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

koi dadi ji ko maaro!!!!

i loved the OS, especially the part where arnav kept going to and fro from the past and the present. Dadi's words, and the moments he had spent with khushi. giving more importance to wat dadi said or reminiscing all the times, spent with the only woman who he could love.

loved arnav! he used his brains!! wooohhooo!!