IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#641

so she hasnt been coming to see him in his dreams or communicating in any form
maybe this is her punishment for ya dear
she waited for ya till she could wait no more and now its your turn
payal sure did tell him what she should have told him ages ago
wow things really did get out of hand didnt they when he abondoned her
so hard it was not to cry while reading this

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Viji

@-Viji-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

God...Arnav's words broke me...It was very heartbreaking chap.😭..very beautiful one...👏

Arnav is living a hell😭

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Happy eid to you to ;) thanks for the lovely update. So deep! Arnav's reply to Payal tore at my heart. I love the sad arnav. But please bring khushi back.

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Arnav's grief and pain was so palpable...😭

Nice update

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urm21

@urm21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

absolutely brill. Payal words - very powerful

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urm21

@urm21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

there are no word that can justify, how good this update is!!!!!!!👏

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Am I wrong at crying for Arnav?

Loved the way you describe Arnav's grief

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richa1792

@richa1792

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

hey..!!! I just came across this story and read it in a go.!!

And i am in love with it.!!

I could so easily visualize the laxminagar house.!!
The house would never welcome anyone anymore.!!

U made me cry.!!! And i pity arnav.!
He has sinned and now he cannot get absolution!

I know we want a happy ending, but really, after all that he has done, does Arnav really deserve it?

I may feel bad for him and pity him, but i am not really that forgiving.!

Anyways, kudos to you.! You are a writing gem.!😊

Oh and P.S. if you have not stopped sending pm's to new readers, can u send me the next time you update?

thanks.!

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

Before i started reading i told myself that i wouldt cry...

And i was doing quite good job...but then the last para...didnt realise that there were tears in my eyes...The way he pleaded Payal to tell her to come to meet him just once.

You are a brilliant writer. Bas.