IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 66

I know i am supposed 2 feel sorry for arnav but aft hearing in detail frm payal's mouth wat he did 2 her i couldn't feel 4 him. now that kushi is dead i dont c any redemption frm him. wats the use wen she is already dead 😕

Thank u so much for the update...arnav's pain is so heart touching..loved it!!!!

Brilliant update I could not read the updates any faster thank you thank you so much for the update an thanks for the pm. Please please can you update soon thanks x

OH my!! that was beautifully sad!!! ... if I may ask.. is it going to be like on the movie 'The Return' where the souls are switched at death...? on the other had you don't have to tell .. I am perfectly capable of waiting...

oh god this is heartbreaking.

Just found this while looking for your other FF ... and went through it in one sitting ... this was brilliant! Feel bad for Arnav but oh, the pain Khushi would have gone through waiting for him to come to her, hoping he would come, and feeling that hope ebb away slowly!

The last words he said to Payal about not being able to see Khushi even in his dreams and wanting her to come to him were heartbreaking. How unutterably tragic it is to live your life knowing you are responsible for shattering your own dreams.

He gets a DNA test done without asking Khushi's mother ... is this to justify the current track when Khushi does exactly the same thing? I'm convinced ... I'm pretty convinced in the track in the show as well, since everyone is so wilfully blind to the similarities.

How often do you update? More to the point, when is your next update going to be?

Oh God! He is on the brink of insanity...requesting Payal like that! Excellent writing!!!