IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 63

Wow...no one can write grief and sorrow the way you do...Period...has the story ended??

Wow !!

That was just a splendid update !
Such an amazing perspective from Payal !

Aww !! i miss seeing this sisterly love these days on the show !
There was this one time during PayAsh marriage when we were shown all of this, but now !
But I loved the update ! The way she expresses her pain and talks to Arnav for the first time I believe !

And Arnav, he has done great wrong, but it still hurt when he asks Payal to request Khushi to come and see him even if it is for a few minutes !
Loved it

Even though he is a rakshas and has driven kushi to death, my heart broke at his request. I teared up. When payal was venting out her anger and loss at Arnav, i was furiously seconding her..but his words...i felt sorry for the man.

Great updates, even reading about wat he had done to Khushi I still felt for him, wonderfully written to allow a reader to feel not only Khushi's but his pain as well even wen he was bein a devil. His can she visit me for a bit, the emotions, really moved me.

I had so many chapters to catch up on... but the last two have had me in floods of tears.

Arnav's very life is his punishment. To live with the knowledge of having killed the person you love the most, a person who was innocent, who was punished because you were weak. & he did kill Khushi, at least for me. What must it be like to breathe with the weight of this sin all over your being? That too for a man like Arnav who, despite all his faults, has an incredibly strong conscience. Such a tortured being, pleading for a false vision to keep him going. He hates himself to the extent that he does not even dare to conjure her up in his dreams, because it would taint her. & yet, his selfish desperate longing for the last piece of herself which she may or may not have left behind. Payal's words just re-iterated what he has always known.

God. I bet if he had believed in a god, he would have prayed for a swift death. Or maybe he does, secretly. What a tragedy. What a destructive love. This just gets sadder and sadder.

Oh well..that brought tears into my eyes..Arnav s grief was so well displayed..

simply wonderful update...so poignant!!arnav's remorse so wonderfully seen in his words to payal.thanks for the pm.

Accidently and fortunately came across this story and my god!!!!!
This last chapter had me shedding real tears and i really hope that our elder khushi is still alive.
I dont know how thats possible cause like he died 8 years ago and all that hey wishful thinking..
Anyway brilliant work but why do you update with such lengthy periods of tine in between????
Please update faster...
Xxx

thanks for the update. "thori der ke liye" moved me to tears.I could visualize a tormented Arnav,.gasping for his "Khushi"