IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
"...Hasn't he suffered enough?"


"No."



Since I have read the sort-of prologue to this where you wrote just what happened to Khushi all those years ago, I can only ask-- Is Payal right? Or is Payal right?

Or am I being just too cruel to a man who has been in purgatory for years? I don't know, I don't know. Napster, you have a knack of making me ask questions which have no correct answers.




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Posted: 13 years ago
Im late to the party...
Whoa this is intense... Im definitely late but is this a sort of sequel to Abshagun? Brilliant... from little Khushis cuteness, to Arnavs despair and Payals anger - cos shes right... he hasnt suffered enough :P
I cant help but hope that theres a happy ending somewhere - its just so emotional to read,
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg, so hooked.
The suspense is killing me!
Pls update soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update...can't wait to find out whats the truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yup now am certain all this suspense will definitely drive me mad don't know about other readers but I soon shall go mad with your suspense dear
So Khushi ain't alive anymore well so it seems but then you never know
And he thinks it his daughter because lil Khushi manners reflect his Khushi but why do I get the feeling that it might not be what he thinks it is
So he hasn't been able to come out of his grief but is it right to believe she is your daughter
Will wait for the next hope that will shed more light on this
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
its getting so interesting and i love the way you create the suspense...plz updt more and asap!!! god I just can't wait to discover if Khushi Sr is still alive or not...🤔 I hope she is...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I can't remember now if you said Khushi's age...but if it's been 8 years, isn't she a bit young to be Khushi/Arnav's child? Am I clutching at non-existent straws?!! You've got us here...😕 How about even a little of this? ...😲 or this? ... Just please not more of this...😕 😕 as otherwise we'll be this...

😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav's monologue was heart wrenching.
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Posted: 13 years ago
how do you write this...??? Man, A's emotions are so poignant...

I'm not sure what the raaz is behind little Khushi or if there is one...but can't wait to read more!

-Sona
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Posted: 13 years ago
dude...hats off.

this a gut-wrenching OS.

he couldn't even look at the sky. i shuddered at that one...


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