IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
very poignant... must be hell for Arnav... to hear his words being repeated to him. But where is Khushi?
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am more confused...
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 3

Aakash and Payal Raizada's bedroom, Raizada House.


"She isn't Khushi's child. The resemblance is uncanny, I agree. Her voice was a shock for me and for Di. I wasn't sure, at first, because the little girl looks like how Khushi used to look at that age. But I know, I know in my heart that she is not my sister's daughter, and he does too. My sister, and her daughter, are both dead and buried on a hill in Shimla. I wont support this, Aakash."

"Payal you know this is the first time he has reacted to anything, felt anything. This is the first time since he got back from the Ashram that he has even taken her pictures out of storage, brought out her albums and mementos. The first time in eight years, Payal. Even if it is a fantasy, just a case of mistaken identity, can't you let him have this? Just for a little while? Hasn't he suffered enough?"



"No."


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Arnav Singh Raizada's bedroom, Raizada House


"Di, can you call Mehta, and ask him to immediately send over our employee records for Amrita Singh? What I'm looking for is proof that she is not who she says she is, or proof that somehow something happened eight years ago.


Maybe she adopted Khushi, maybe she stole her from the Ashram. I don't know----those things wont be in those files. So we need to look into this woman's background. I've already told Aman to look into every single last detail about this woman. I need to find out how she ended up with my daughter, and how she is getting away with declaring that that child, Khushi's baby, my baby, is her own. I want to know every last thing about that woman, and her husband--what was it--Pradeep. Yes, Pradeep. Every detail. Do you hear me, Di? "



"Chote...".


"I don't trust just Aman on this. He won't understand how important it is. He wont understand how very important this is, Di. I want you to help him. Do you hear me, Di?"


"Yes Chote. I hear you."

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Amrita Singh's bedroom, 16-C West Side Apartments, Delhi


"...and then I fell, and then Uncle-ji came, and then I was not on the ground any more. And Simran didi told me to be a good girl and not cry, and then I didn't cry. Okay but I did cry, I forgot, but now I remember, so remember, momma, I did cry. But only a little because it hurt, momma, but then Uncle-ji fixed it, and the hurt went from my foot to his face. I think. And then his face hurt, but not my foot. And then I remembered your number, but Uncle-ji said to wait and you would come. And then Simran didi said she would come to play with me tomorrow, so I will have her to watch for me at the playground. And Uncle-ji too, I expect because he was nice, and he can play if he likes. And then...!!"


"Oooff!!! Khushi! Bohot raat hogaye hai! Soh jao! You have to be fresh for your game at the park with your new Simran didi, right? Go to sleep beta, and let momma sleep too!"

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Poolside, Raizada House.

"I have found her, Khushi. Eight years, she was hidden from me. Did you know, Khushi? That they would hide her from me? Because I know you didn't hide her. How could you hide her? You went away, so who knows who took her, who kept her from me. I didn't know I had the chance to have her, Khushi. I didn't know, or I would have looked, every day, every moment. But see what happened, Khushi! Without looking, without knowing, I have found her. I will have our baby with me. I will have her so I can love her and keep her happy, I will be her papa and momma, her everything.


Thank you, Khushi.


Maybe my punishment is finally over, and Maa and you have decided to let me have my star right here on earth. You both know I wont be coming up to the heavens to be with you when I die, so you knew I'd have to find my star here. And I have found her, Khushi. I couldn't speak to you again, look at you again, without finally finding a way of paying for what I have done. But now I will take care of our baby, I will love her, and give her everything I could not give you. How are you doing up there, Khushi? Eight years, and I couldn't look up at the sky even one time, to see you, to feel you looking at me.

I didn't have the guts Khushi.

But whatever pain I have given you, I have felt it a thousand times more, felt it for every moment, and I have paid, Khushi. Sooth samedh, I have paid. Ab to maaf kardo..."

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TO BE CONTINUED..

PART 4 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66204051
Edited by napstermonster - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'd say i am sorry Rafa, but I am not! :P

And the chapter!

Woman, are you planning to kill me off with the suspense?

Is Payal too involved to see that the kid might be her niece? Or is she wishing that she isn't because she refuses to believe that she didn't know? Or is it because she doesn't want Arnav to be close to his daughter? Or does she genuinely believe that the young Khushi isn't Arnav's daughter!?

And Khushi Khushi is dead? Like gone? Forever? :(

Amrita doesn't seem afraid of Arnav seeing Khushi though, so I am thinking Payal is right?

Or maybe Arnav's just searching too hard to find something that would make the pain go away, make him feel like he didn't destroy it all!

I don't know! I just don't know!

When's the next update going to be!????
Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Res

YES! *fist pump!*

Rafa...:P



HATE YOU.
P.S. How do you take your tea/ coffee Ridz?


Edited by arisai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arisai



HATE YOU
P.S. How do you take your tea/ coffee Ridz?



❤️

😆

Without regret?
Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oaky this is confusing even more dear
why is it seeing lil khushi arnie is being weird
why do i think her mother might not be that woman
what have you planned i wonder
there is more to this than we can see
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh so now Mr ASR is going all beserk over little Khushi thinking she is his daughter, how crazy?

I dont get one thing though, how does he know she is dead, and talking to her as if she is a star? Or is it just an assumption based on with whom the other Khushi is staying.

I like Payal here, just saying, she is strong and voices her thoughts.

Update soon-ish. I will be waiting!
Edited by inspiringstars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ... that last bit was ... something.

I actually felt sorry for him 😕

But at the same time, he lost his chance when he had it and he himself was responsible for everything going away. No point regretting it now -____-

Glad Payal also thinks the same!


Somehow, it doesn't seem like Amrita's gonna come out of all of this unscathed - ASR is in full-form!


Great update! ⭐️
Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
BRILLIANTLY written! Ok I'm going to try and wring more than two sentences. I love you innate ability of story telling! seriously woman, you amaze me! Be it whole chapters with no dialogues or only containing dialogues like this one. Everything is crystal clear, every sentence makes sense, every paragraph beautifully organised, every thought flowing into the next.. yes i said FLOWING!

It's truly a treat reading your works! I hope you update soon 😊

cheers!

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