SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!)

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SARUN.fangirl18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

lovely😃

poor arnnoww😭😆

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Peppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Both the parts were superb.
I love your idea about khushi having partial amnesia. She has forgotten everything that she has suffered at Arnav's hands. If ARanv looks at it with optimism...then he will realise that faith has given him a chance to start afresh. To make khushi fall in love with the aranv in him. To woo her...As far as she is concerned there are no bad memories in her mind right now.

waiting for the next part...please continue soon

thanks for the PM

im sure he will. he's arnav singh raizada... he knows how to make the best of all the situations!😉

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

wow,awesome. .no words. .its a new start now i guess. . waiting 4 more,thanks for the pm. .
P.S.-what you mean by "setting a base",in IF language,we would call this chapter a "filler update". .just saying . .😉

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@darkangel93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha
wow,awesome. .no words. .its a new start now i guess. . waiting 4 more,thanks for the pm. .
P.S.-what you mean by "setting a base",in IF language,we would call this chapter a "filler update". .just saying . .😉

lol.. i know.. i was myself about to use the very same words... but then i thought better of it and wrote 'setting a base'... aka filler chapter... 😆 thanks for commenting!!!

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soumee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

I LOVE DIS FANFIC...it's just too good...d last lines a killer one...Tara, u sure hav talent...plz continue n pm me wen u do...

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bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Wow...A fabulous SS...I didnt get time to read this earlier because of my busy schedule...Sorry for the late comments...I loved the way you developed the story.I liked Khushi's partial amnesia...She should not forgive Arnav soon...Thanks for the PM

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

these are the kinds of scenes I just love... the emotions coming to the fore and people trying to cope with the hand they've been dealt! arnav's immediate reaction to khushi's question is so typically arnav! loved the calm and collected doctor who knows how to handle not only a confused and scared khushi but also her temperamental husband!

that last line by arnav was truly poignant and touching... a wonderful piece of writing

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choochootrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

E trauma was so great tat it made kushi blocked it frm her memory...so sad for her...hope arnav dont give up n will try to woo her again...

I love ur story n not forgetting ur style of writing...can feel for e characters...

Tanx for e pm!!...
Anticipating e nex update...