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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: babli0204
At last !!!!! Charter plane to reach Khushi,hmmm!! What arnav doe snot knwo that his dear ex-wifeand-hopefully-soon -to-be-wife-again is already within his reach-in Lucknow!!!!

First he should have checked out about her whereabouts from Payal at least !!!!
Anyway, our dear Aman got compliments from his boss...not a trivial achivement at all!!!
But why charter plane?!?! He already owns a copter, or so I thought (remember the bery first episode of IPKKND?!?!?) !!!
Next part please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS a lot for the PM Smitzy!!!

Hey there! Thanks to you for a lovely comment! 😊

Nahh, Arnav is pretty clueless about his wife's whereabouts but then that is what makes the reunion even more special doesn't it. hehehee I'll just ask you to wait patiently for the next update shhh 😉

And ya Aman poor thing.. abhi to usse aur kaam nikalwayega ASR!

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
*Startrs reading the chapter...
and then reads again!

Smitzzyy🤗

I loved it!❤️
It was beautifully written!
Loved how you captured all the emotions of each and every person!😃

For all these years, they treasured all the good memories of their father...but i guess this one mistake has made evrything go sour. Even good memories dont hold that much happiness, that they once did!😳

Liked how he suddenly talks about Khushi and only her.
He knew he made a mistake, especially after the way he told her to leave Garima!

It must hurt him, knowing that Khushi knew it before he did!
And obviusly the way he behaved with her after, must have hurt her!

LOL!
Aman, bechara..."thanks", "lifesaver"...he must be soo confused!🤣

Damn, hes going to Dilli!
Knew it, dono ko tu toh ghuma firake hi milayegi!
Koi nai, ussi mein toh maza hai!
Bas zyaada mat tadpa.😛

Jaldi update kariyo!

Muah!

Shwethaaa 🤗

Hey darling! Maja aaya na? good mujhe bhi majaa aaya! You can't believe what a nerve wracking experience it was writing this chapter... phew!

ghuma fira ke hi milaungi in dono ko, ladki! Itne asaani se nahi ASR, abhi to you'll have to look for her everywhere, and that he will.. Ya he is going to Dilli 😆

and Aman hahaha theek hai yaar, us bechare ko bhi kabhi kabhi tareef sunne ka mauka milna chahiye.. as such apni raaton ki neend aur din ka chain to aise hi ASR ne loot rakha hai 😆

yes yes update will happen soon! stay tuned!

kissy wissy for you too!! 😳

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: crazyweird
Awesome
I love the way you write the story
And all emotions depicted so well

Thanks 😊

thanks dear for your lovely words! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: angie_g82
I am truly in love with the story line.

aha! thanks my lady! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Three cheers to all readers! 👏Justice provided to all family members. It was a very clean and proper exit for Dadi. She needed to realize that her son was responsible for all this mess...she must remove the mother's veil in front of her eyes and face the truth as well as the consequences.

Smitzy, you did an amazing job with handling all the diary mess and not stretching it. Arnav's anger was just mind-blowing and his reactions towards Dadi was nerve-jerking. I felt like crying listening to another mother defending her child, Nani😭 So long she must have kept quiet and listened to Dadi accuse her daughter. Today she found her voice. 😃

Hey fairy!

thanks so much for your lovely comment! 😊

Yes I've always advocated clean endings for everyone.. Well does she realise she was responsible for the mess, I don't know. Will she ever hold her son responsible for everything he did? I don't know. What I do know is that this is the end of Subhadra Devi. She'll probably head back to the Ashram now (the actual one not the mental asylum she had escaped from 😆) and hope for some sanity to return to her soon.

Nani... you know I really love her character. She is one of the sweetest most mature people in the Raizada family. Even in her anger, she doesn't lose focus. Even in her sadness she doesn't become like Rudali and she's fiercely loyal to the people she loves.. I really love her! 😊

thanks again.. I see you have another comment for the next scene I'll get down to replying to it hehehe

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
I'm loving the way the story is shaping up!! kudos!!😃
please don't make kushi give in so easily...i want to see ASR use all his powers of wooing and persuasion to win her back...also waiting for some romantic arshi scenes too😳

thanks a lot dear! Yes yes he will be using every trick in the book to patao his darling.. but sab hoga dheere dheere.. patience rakhne ka padi 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: sohara
Amazing. Just loved this chapter.
Arnav is desperate to meet Khushi. Nothing can stop him now. So he is going to meet her in Chartered plain, without having the knowledge that Khushi is not so far from him.But eventually they will meet.
I loved mature and sensible Anjali more in your story.
Eagerly waiting for Arshi's reunion.

thanks a lot dear! 😊 I too prefer the Anjali of this FF hahahaa oh wait that's coz I'm writing her this way LOL!! stay tuned for the next update.

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
Wooohooo! 🥳Arnav is going to get Khushi *does a small bangra* But Khushi is in Lucknow so what is gonna happen?! 😲Ah, the suspense.

What I liked is that he actually remembers their conversation after the marriage broke and realizes that Khushi knew the truth. When I began reading, I felt so bad for the three Raizadas that even I forgot what this meant. Then as Arnav hears Garima name, I was oh yes! 👍🏼Here comes the dhamak-e-dar part. It's funny to see his brain function and connect the dots. And thanks for highlighting the brother sister relationship here...it consistent with the past chapter. Anjali has this special Arnav reader radar. She knows when to question and when to just stay quiet and understand.

Charter plane to find Khushi ji, so sweet. 😆

oooh la la la another long comment kya baat hai ! 👏

oooh yes! Khushi is in Lucknow and Arnav is in Delhi.. ye kya ho raha hai? suspense build up ho raha hai ji hehehe

anjali and Arnav are the best sibling bond.. the CVs have just made it creepy, but otherwise I used to be really jealous of their bond seeing as I don't have any siblings of my own 😆 NOT THAT I want ASR as a brother *swoon*

ahem ahem 😳

ya Arnav has a Harvard brain yaar, mazaak thodi na hai.. itne connect the dots to class 5th ka bachha bhi kar leta hai.. he has to prove his shrewdness!

stay tuned.. next update coming up soon! 😊

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asr13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Helloooz update kahan hai ? 😛

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
Loved 12.2 & 12.3!!!! I could totally imagine Barun acting out 12.2. That was fantastic!

Hope he finds Khushi soon. He's got a lot of groveling to do.

thanks a lot dear! 😊

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