FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 39

Originally posted by: -kitzdoll-

oh wow awsuuum update dear...it was wonderful...really loved it n thnx 4da pm...

Originally posted by: babli0204

Quote: "The mighty Subhadra Devi had finally fallen."
This sums up the chapter!!!!! It is just WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND HOW she has fallen!!!
Loved Arnav in the confrontation scene.
Loved Nani!!!
Now only Shaym is left to take care of !!
THANKS for the PM Smitzy!!!!!

Originally posted by: VasantiLad

Smita- I boqw down to you - you had me hanging with the monologue - on each statement - gripped to the end - loved the ASR in this scene - well done

Originally posted by: segad

I wish I knew how to get you to send your FF to the CVs. You write so much better than them. This would have been so much preferable to what we had to see.

Solid TRP boost ho jaata

Lage raho. Aur Kaamyaab bano!👏

Originally posted by: asr13

👏

Kya SOLID update tha boss ... Mazaa aa Gaya, as you promised ...but I was sure ki you'll do proper justice ache se !!!

More than ASR, I loved Nani's stance on he daughter ...😊 ...that actually shook the mighty D-woman 😆😆...

Nice !!!

Originally posted by: vivagal

Arnav is going back to Khushi isn't he...Can't wait to see how he is going to win her back

Originally posted by: *mad*

10.3
what on earth is shyam doing??? forging the documents??
He reminds me of my cat..never satisfied with anything..always wants more..and bother everyone to get his way..at least my cat is tolerable cos she is nice sometimes
Arnav wants to punish garima??? is he out of his mind? thank god you got anjali to tell him off...

11.1
He is back to the beginning.. now im having my fingers crossed as i read the rest... :)
so no khushi
was nk really trying to annoy arnav?

11.2
oooh they are opening up the locked door
that should be fun
horses?? what exactly are u planning...arnav in a horse chasing after khushi?? hahahhahahahahha

11.3
arnav is sneaky... he got the diary..YES
its nice to see that he can still talk about all the good things khushi had told him
So is he going to read this diary soon?
let me read the next part

12.1
K arnav is asking very odd question... defi he will think about her cos he is in love with her...wht he thinks he cn
he forgot all abt the payal and diary??? that is all i can think about
wow that was one awesome diary
it cleared up everything...arnavs dad was so nice.. he wrote everything so that it is easy for arnav to scream at dadi and kick her out of his life

12.2
volcano is the correct word for what is about to happen
now that is how it should have been
dadi getting her share
for weeks we had to listen to her mahaan talk...some 1 should have returned the favor. that would have been awesome...and to see her all broken.. that would have made my day..cos she need to come down from that cloud she lived in... I loved that nani also stepped up and defended her daughter.. some one got to
ooh now the fun part.. bye bye dadi and arnav got lot of groveling to do...asking for forgiveness is not one of arnavs best qualities.. this should be fun..

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

*is soo damn happy!
jumping in excitement!
And goes to read again!😉

Smitzzyyy🤗

Holy Crap!
Kya thodh scene tha yaar!!👏
Just Loved it to the core!❤️

Really liked how you started the scene...subtly comparing Arnav to a volacano!😊
I soo feel for the poor guy!

Liked how he called for her, he just brought the entire house down!
And the confrontation...
WOW!
By God, kya chillaya usne!
The way he shouted at Dadi, showed how much pain he was in and he let it all out!!

The look on Dadi, the moment she identifies the diary = Priceless!😉
She was damn scared!!

"Agar aapki Maa ek kamzor aurat thi, to uski galti hamare bete ke nahin thi!"
The nerve of her to even say this!!
i mean are you kidding me!?😲
Hell with the thing that mother always supports the child...This is too big of a wrong to support.
What bothers me is that shes not even acknowledging it, even a tiny bit!☢️
She pointing fingers at everyone but her bloody son!

And Nani...i salute you!👏
I just really do!

There were 2 major setbacks in Arnavs life, the incident 14 years ago and the broken mariage and in a way both of them were caused by Dear Dadi!

The mighty Subhadra Devi had finally fallen.
Woohooo!!🥳

Though i feel a bit sad for her now!😕
Good for Arnav to cut all the ties with his Dearest Dadi!

That's how i wanted the confrontation to happen , and you just delivered!
Fantastic Job yaar!⭐️

I love you damnit!!🤗

And seriously, this what i want to do to Dadi...& well Rajeev to if he were alive!🐷




And now im soo waiting for Arnav-Khushi confrontation!
Im pretty sure its going to be on hell of a convo too!😃

Again, Awesome job!😳

Muah!🤗

PS - Just read ur reply to the previous comment...didnt know comments ke liye bhi awards hain...
But Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: kbtr

That was exhausting! I feel like I was one of them! I know you'll think I am crazy, but I actually feel sorry for Dadi. Amazing testament to your writing! The poor soul. It was her son after all. I wonder if Arnav will ever forgive his father. How else will he move on? Maybe Kushi can help him to do that. I'm getting really impatient now about their meeting. How come there was nothing about the Guptas? I do realize this impact was the turning point in the story and probably had to be spotlighted. My question is how the hell is Arnav going to seek redemption from Kushi now. He did not trust her, he jilted her, he broke her heart. What the hell can he do now? He has broken her trust in him. There is NOTHING he can do that will make it alright now. It is a big, black, luminous cloud hanging over his head, that he did not trust her. Trust. The biggest word and the most fragile in any relationship. I am awaiting to see how you meet this challenge.

See, your writing has made me feel for Arnav! I still don't want Kushi to forgive him easily though. I mean just because he might shed a few tears and maybe say sorry, I wouldn't want her to forgive and forget (which I know is the only way to move on.) But he has to earn his trust back from her. Please do not let him off easily. He has to make her see and believe with conviction that he will never do anything like that again. I mean how could he discard her like an old shirt? Who says he wouldn't do it again the next time something happens??

Jeez! I cannot wait for the next scene. But I especially cannot wait for their inevitable meeting!

Thanks for the PM.😃