FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122 - Page 36

keep it coming 😆Good Job! Can't wait for Arnav and Khushi to meet. Bring her to Arnav's hand somehow. Don't mind even if she falls directly from heaven to his arms! Just want them together 😃

Wow, that was totally solid! I loved it!

whoa... fast paced and loving it...

Superb... Such old women with outdated and warped thinking poison the whole atmosphere.

the ph should follow your story 👍🏼

10.3
what on earth is shyam doing??? forging the documents??
He reminds me of my cat..never satisfied with anything..always wants more..and bother everyone to get his way..at least my cat is tolerable cos she is nice sometimes
Arnav wants to punish garima??? is he out of his mind? thank god you got anjali to tell him off...

11.1
He is back to the beginning.. now im having my fingers crossed as i read the rest... :)
so no khushi
was nk really trying to annoy arnav?

11.2
oooh they are opening up the locked door
that should be fun
horses?? what exactly are u planning...arnav in a horse chasing after khushi?? hahahhahahahahha

11.3
arnav is sneaky... he got the diary..YES
its nice to see that he can still talk about all the good things khushi had told him
So is he going to read this diary soon?
let me read the next part

12.1
K arnav is asking very odd question... defi he will think about her cos he is in love with her...wht he thinks he cn
he forgot all abt the payal and diary??? that is all i can think about
wow that was one awesome diary
it cleared up everything...arnavs dad was so nice.. he wrote everything so that it is easy for arnav to scream at dadi and kick her out of his life

12.2
volcano is the correct word for what is about to happen
now that is how it should have been
dadi getting her share
for weeks we had to listen to her mahaan talk...some 1 should have returned the favor. that would have been awesome...and to see her all broken.. that would have made my day..cos she need to come down from that cloud she lived in... I loved that nani also stepped up and defended her daughter.. some one got to
ooh now the fun part.. bye bye dadi and arnav got lot of groveling to do...asking for forgiveness is not one of arnavs best qualities.. this should be fun..

NANI! You the man! Or woman, or whatever! Never expected to see this side of her!

Awesome update! (Y)

That was exhausting! I feel like I was one of them! I know you'll think I am crazy, but I actually feel sorry for Dadi. Amazing testament to your writing! The poor soul. It was her son after all. I wonder if Arnav will ever forgive his father. How else will he move on? Maybe Kushi can help him to do that. I'm getting really impatient now about their meeting. How come there was nothing about the Guptas? I do realize this impact was the turning point in the story and probably had to be spotlighted. My question is how the hell is Arnav going to seek redemption from Kushi now. He did not trust her, he jilted her, he broke her heart. What the hell can he do now? He has broken her trust in him. There is NOTHING he can do that will make it alright now. It is a big, black, luminous cloud hanging over his head, that he did not trust her. Trust. The biggest word and the most fragile in any relationship. I am awaiting to see how you meet this challenge.

Wow what a confrontation...hats off to you woman...am totally in love with your writing now...eager to know more...thanks for pm:-)