FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

cant wait to see what is in the dungeon

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Nice update.

Hate to do this but in all honesty I have to do it.

Shashi is paralyzed as a result of a stroke, right. How is spinal surgery gonna help him? Aap kaho to in the interest of creative liberty we can let it go.

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

smitzy thod story develop ho jaye then the comments will flow dont worry.

ur style is very unique and ican picture the scene perfectly. i hope u continue this alternate world of ARSHI

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Penned well...The secrets will be unwrapped and I think what is inside kale kothri will help them.Thanks to the PM

Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Marvelous update. So, our three brothers are going to search the dungeon, what secrets could be uncovered down there. Could you please let discovery put Dadi in a very bad position??? That would make my day. So Devi Maiyya has put Khushi and Arnav in same place again. You can't out run destiny...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Look forward to your next update...

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

wonderful udpate

loved it

Arnav, Akash and NK three bro on advanture...sounds like three musketeers 😆...wonder what they will find in the kothri...

plz cont. soon

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Liked it a lot, waiting for the reiki of the haveli to see what skeletons come out...also waiting for arnav and Khushi to meet! Thanks for the pm.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

That was a very interesting update. Can't wait to see what is in the dungeon.

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Akira Singh

@tinsel_akira

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Great part
Wow I also wanna check out such a place and dungeons
Dark places in a fiction or fairytale have always been my fav

Well waiting for scene 3

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Princessbride

@Princessbride

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

This is riveting! I've been a silent reader so far but I saw a comment about people asking for arhi scenes. This is your story and you should stay true to it, after all you don't have to worry about TRPs.😆

I love your descriptions, I can picture the scene very well, and I am hooked on the mystery of the purani haveli...can't wait for the next update!