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@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Aww that was the sweetest update evetyn was sweet! Arhis Sr or be it mili-nk kitchen encounter was so. Cute!!
cheers for the post :)

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

awww so romantic and adorable update, muaaahhh Smita.

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tmowla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

this update was soo cute and the best so far...

mamaji said correctly : "love is in the air"

very lovely update!!

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

amazzzing update...super gud story...love everyone in here

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suwin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

thank you for the update 😃

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pips27

@pips27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

i was laughing hard when khushi was happily ready to go to bed after their kiss 🤣

and now another story is brewing 😳 ... our beloved nk and mili 😳 hope he doesn't get beat by those 4 brothers 🤪

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

hell why do i keep forgetting that you update this everyday...*whacks her head*

aww khushi is soo innocent..
such a blissful chapter on their suhaagraat..i loved it to bits...

aha ha another wedding is making its way..
NK-milli...i want more of 'em..but i need a lot more of arshi !!!

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anu

@anu17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

this is really lovely

waiting for the next update

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

awesome update loved it finally the sr awesome khushi is so innocent and nk finally he got to talk to milli

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meeyaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Hey Smita

That was good...but i thought we didnt get a glimpse of what Khushi was feeling ...i was with her till the end of last chapter...but then her acceptance of what is happening was very sudden ...

would have loved to read about her surprise at what was happening... didnt she resist even a bit...jewelleries was ok... but how would she let him remove her dresses... without getting shocked ... being confused... arnav himself telling her what it is supposed to be.. her sudden realization... her fear... his assurance... her doubts... his love...and finally her decision to go ahead... and their wonder and joy in finding each other...

you have shown so much innocence in her that i couldnt jump from that state to a full blown SR without getting to read those things...i was actually thinking he would just give her a glimpse of what it was supposed to be that night... considering how naive she was...:)

Probably you could give us her thoughts in the morning after...:)

Btw...loved NK and Mili track...

Regards !

*Editted: I loved that chapter in Living without you...where you described Khushi's realization of the woman she was...and her love...this is probably a SS and so things are hurried...:) ...

Edited by meeyaa - 13 years ago

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