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fire.vs.ice

@fire.vs.ice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow m speechless...u portrayed exactly what would go yhrough arnav's mind when dadi tells him...and what khushi would hv said if he had askd hr...amazing!

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Sorry I didn't check your scrap.

Me & Ri are khushi's Best friends? *gulps* Unbelievable! I'm stuck at that point. I was staring at my name like a fool 😆

The OS was lovely. Beautifully written. The way you connected life to exams was fabulous. You & your ideas are just..just..awesome.

Loved each & everything especially the bad luck thing, I also do that 😆

And can I say that I was so happy when Arnav confronted khushi rather than beating around the bush? I hope we'll get to see something like that on the show too.

Sorry abhi itne se kaam chala le, I'll give a long comment later. Pakka!

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Such a beautiful one shot...Amazed me...Each and every emotions were very well described ...I m still in an awe...Just Loved it :)

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Im gonna report this OS ... Right now .. Why? U dare to ask me why? Oh! Ill tell you why.. Because dear author ur OS is fabulous .. The way u combined a memory and d present it was awesome. Being an amateur writer and someone who hardly comments I did ... Hehe love this!!

Kiara

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Wow! That was just Beautiful Risha! How do you write so beautifully Dammit! How???????

I am like stunned!

I really loved the way you compared the examination and Marriage.Especially Maths exam! 🤢

I loved the superstitious belief about Cooking pooris and exams going wrong! LOL

Trust me my heart was racing as if i was writing the exam or as if i am khushi who is waiting for Arnav to do something after knowing the truth!

It was just amazing! I am happy that Arnav dint do anything in a fit of an anger but asked Khushi for her opinion.And her answer for his questions made me awe at her too.So much of maturity and kindness! For a second i thought she would leave Arnav after knowing the truth! But finally the Love conquers all.When he asked "Will you marry me" I was like "YAY!!!!!"

Beautiful! *Sigh*

Love you for this 🤗

PS: YAY! My name was in your OS---> Gayathri! 😆

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

beautifully written.. i dont think u knw.. but eating eggs, rasgullla, gulab jamun, puri, chapatti or anything circular b4 exam is considered bad luck by many.. many ppl hv rice b4 exams for this reason
I loved this plz pm me if u write more

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alisondi

@alisondi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Loved it!!!!!!! Like all of ur other works:))))

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arshi21

@arshi21

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

How I wish and wish for the story to unfurl the same way.

How I wish for Arnav to marry his Khushi...

Awesome job Risha! :)

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

oh...that was a nail biting story...
loved the idea how merged it with those frightful exam days...
loved the ending...

thanks so much for the pm...:)))