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Arshi1195

@Arshi1195

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Re read this after a long time :')

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Re-read the story again... and how much ever time i read it... it always manages to put a lump in my throat with the sheer magnifience you have spun in this tale... 🤗
hope all is fine at your end... pls do not give up on this tale and pls continue soon... there are readers out there waiting 😊

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

A very heart-touching and an inspiring piece of fiction. And you deserve a commendable round of applause for a story woven so beautifully. With every chapter, there was an elegant build-up of anxiety and uncertainty just as it is with life and what future has in store for us. And to grapple with death at every second of your life surely increases the uncertainty manifolds. And it is very easy to break down because at the end of the day, we are all humans.

The Khushi that you penned down is just as real and natural while Arnav is a rare breed in the world, but nonetheless, present.

And, no, I wouldn't say Khushi did not die, because death is an inevitable truth. But she definitely did not die of cancer. She survived. And it wasn't her last "I love you".

There is something about the way you write, so supple and yet impactful, that makes the reading experience much more delightful. It is us experiencing the same anguish, pain or happiness as that of the characters in your story and it is surely astounding.

Looking forward to you writing more of such graceful pieces. Count me in as your loyal reader, yeah?!

Edited by arpitasharma - 11 years ago

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Reveur

@Reveur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

"It was a pity though - because neither her love for life nor his love for her could save her."
It felt good to see your story had such a realistic touch to it. I am so glad to be saying you are an awesome writer. Lots of love! 🤗