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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

I won't ever forget this story, you know why? because I've never read something so beautiful, I don't know why you chose to write this story, about cancer, I don't know how you understand it so well but the little that I understand of it makes me praise the beauty of your work. you make me cry every time, you remind me of things, you give me things to think about.
I don't know if khushi's operation will be successful but its going to be a beautiful next chapter to this story

love
Sonia

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#542

very well written..simply brilliant..😊

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

You almost always leave me fumbling for words to describe my emotions...

Very beautifully written...every word was heartfelt...I cry almost after every update.

Continue soon...waiting eagerly.!!!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Amazing update. Every time a read an update, I just get sucked into Arnav and Khushi's story: their story of love, survival, and of holding on and not letting go. Thanks for writing this story. This line is so simple yet so beautiful:"...There is no happy without you. Such a place does not exist. So do me a favour Khushi - do not die on me."

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-Mistletoe-

@-Mistletoe-

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Just finished reading all the chapters of this story, and even though I am stating the obvious, but I have to say that you have a way with words, hon. 😊

This storyline - of a cancer-affected girl falling in love, has been used in a lot of books, FFs etc. But what makes this particular story stand out is the way you have penned it. There are very few authors who are able to translate emotions so well on paper, you are one of them.

I loved how the story's events made a smooth transition from playful to poignant, from the first feelings of attraction to the promise of togetherness. This story presented rules of attraction - and then so much more.

I attribute all of it, to your exceptional writing skills. 😃

My heart broke seeing the effervescent Khushi wither away due to her illness, I shed a tear when Arnav married her despite everything and promised to stay with her till the end. I cried some more when they shared their deepest fears with each other, at their admission - 'Im scared.'

I hope she survives the surgery, Arnav and her deserve all the happiness in life.

I'll be here waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for such a heart wrenchingly beautiful story. 🤗

Edited by -Mistletoe- - 11 years ago

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Wow Sona... Heart wrenching update... I'm a sucker for happy outcomes... So please let her live! The wait is killing so hoping for another update soon!!!!!!

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Clearly, the surgery has gone well. Or is there still some treatment pending? I love how you switch in the timelines. There is bareness about the chapters especially in the end - the fear which is so palpable and the love, especially that. I look forward to more. :-)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Comment Edited -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93212269

Sorry for the delay in editing the 'Res'.

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Your words are literally breaking my heart... I am not sure if I want Khushi's suffering to end or Arnav's sadness to go away... For if Khushi's sufferings end, Arnav will never be happy again.

I want Khushi to survive this... for Arnav... for herself...

I want her to make him breakfast and fight over what shall they name their kids...

🥺

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#550

this is so heart wrenching...
i wouldnt imagine how you are pulling up the emotions and misery and their love and sufferings for this long and each time there are tears in my eyes.. hats off to you for that...
the dancing in the rain scene and their little moments with that would brought smile to any readers but at the same time it wouldnt fail to make our heart squeeze in pain with anticipation for what may follow after..
and the hospital scene...that broke the dam finally..
please Sonaji do us a favor and dont let khushi die...

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