This may be a ramble and for that I apologize.
When I read this chapter, it took me a while to connect the happenings but that I dont blame you for because a. I understand you have exams and b. I would be the biggest hypocrite to chide someone for not updating because of exams and other things, so lets keep that aside.
As usual, your writing was fab and after skimming through the last chapter again, I understood that the beginning part of this chapter was like a detailed version of the happenings of the last chapter and that was pretty nicely done.
Arnav and Khushi's conversation - straight yet poetic - is what this story is thriving on at this moment along with the poetic and reflective way you write of course, however the wedding seemed a bit haste and left me a bit dazed in the sense of how did they come back to Lucknow so soon, presumably leaving her treatment in the middle...?
I felt like this chapter was a little disconnected from the rest of the story and a little rushed, but I am willing to give you the last one as that may just be something akin to what you did in the beginning i.e. detailing later but I did feel it was a bit disconnected, however that could be completely my view. Having said this, the last part with Arnav's insecurity about her and their future but his will to comfort her and hope for the best brought me back to the ROA we have always known and it was woven beautifully.
And your writing was fab as usual and painted vivid pictures and the images you used brought a smile to my face.
And you're back writing and updating...YAY! :)
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