Rules Of Attraction#3 Chapter 37 02/10 Pg73 NEW!

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

i hope Khushi can be saved otherwise Arnav will die without her

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Ultimatewishes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

It was awesome , this chapter displayed the emotions beautifully...they both need each other and its like they are inseparable and she feels his loss , for maybe the first time Arnav is scared , Scared of losing her .

This chapter is full of promises, He will never leave her , and will cherish her , and I love the fact that he makes her feel so special! It is important for someone who is going through something as big as cancer, to have support from someone , the fact that he has stuck by her and has been there with her means a lot more than anything , she needs his presence.

I love the love between them ( if that makes sense ) , it's like two pieces of a puzzle that join together , without one the whole picture is incomplete and that is what I love , the fact that they are so joined

I felt that the quickness and the fast pace of this chapter was a lot to do with how she has cancer and doesn't want to waste a moment in her life , very moment is so special when you know your breaths are counted so that's why I thought you kept a fast pace , and that's the link i made and I think it justifies that she wants to get married feel love and do everything because she doesn't know when it will be her last breath.

I loved this chapter , made me go through the emotion of pain and separation and re-union and it also reminded me why I love reading .

PS. I loved the song!, It's one of my favourites and It goes with this song so well ...the lyrics fit in to the message thats been conveyed !:)😊

Edited by UltimateWishes - 12 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

amazing story...just finished reading it in one go and i must tell you i was all tears mixed with smile...

i don;t know how to describe what i felt..its like i can't read the end..i am really scared to even think about the possibility of a sad end...

this fic felt like poetry to me...hats off to you for writing such a master piece..

continue soon

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Finally u updates...

awesome update

i love ur arnav khushi

their love

their hope

love everything

u portray everything so beautifully in this chapter from hope to wedding

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mrignayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

aah...that was so emotional...very well written!

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

glad you are back...

the proposal,the wedding,and the end all i can say is wow fantastic👏

thanks for the pm

waiting to know what the future has in store for them

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Pleased you updated

Lovely update was really beautiful with the proposal, wedding and the last paragraph.

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Finally you r back & what not U wrote such an wonderful update. Arnav & Khushi got married yayy!!! I'm rejoiced & happy for them. I love the way Arnav show his concern about her health & the description on the wedding attires was mind blowing. Hope they will be 2gether 4ever.

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

oh its very dreamy...

loved the way you wrote the proposal and the wedding was done you payed more attention to their feelings than the rituals and all...that was great...

khushi and arnav they are damn lucky despite her illness and his fear of losing her...everything is so poignant amidst the given background that i cant help anything but sigh...