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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nmyra
Hello!!

Wow...um usually I am not a fan of first person narratives but this was astoundingly well written. I love how the entire OS feels like one person talking to them-self/their subconscious.

In fact to mention things I loved, I normally dislike colored font's but yours was very muted and not glaringly bright, giving it enough color to pop but not enough to bring on a migraine.

In other words the presentation was perfect, the wording was beautiful. Brava!!👏

Thank you for your this wonderful comment Nmyra :)

I agree, I dont normally use a lot of colors myself except for a few, this one oddly i seem to pick out for most ArHi related stuff. May be it just works for them :)

Had to write something after reading about the new promo.

Cheers,

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tinsel
Beautiful!👏

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Brilliant, Olive.G ! Your os has captured so perfectly the pain and heartbreak that will come with the imminent, maybe, impending separation as yet again circumstances, history and their own natures seem to be conspiring to bring about.

"I know now I am lost, lost to you and lost to myself" sums up the hopelessness of it all so poignantly.

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

perfect,just perfect👏👏

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
simply superb..loved it,,

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: inajnar
Omg...This was so Poignant ..so beautiful and so poetic...

Your OS seems to have captured v well the inner turmoil that they are gonna face once the truth has been unleashed on them...
Beautifully Written !!

Thank you for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

Yes, its going to be interesting to see how they play this out.

cheers,

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kritu17krits
nyc

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Japonica
Brilliant, Olive.G ! Your os has captured so perfectly the pain and heartbreak that will come with the imminent, maybe, impending separation as yet again circumstances, history and their own natures seem to be conspiring to bring about.

"I know now I am lost, lost to you and lost to myself" sums up the hopelessness of it all so poignantly.

Hi there,

@the bold, conspiring is the right word. I love that bit in bold. You know, may be there is a light at the end of the tunnel and perhaps the conspiracies will not weaken their bond only strengthen it. There is always hope, besides what is a love story without hope. May be the man will surprise us all this time, just may be...

Thank you for commenting Japonica.

cheers!

Aria

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

He doesn't want to let but yet he does. I can't even be sure if here they are he or she but it really doesn't matter because this one A, seems to be a perfect predicament they might be in. I would like to quote a few sentences I loved but I think everyone one must have already done that...
Poignant and beautiful!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ajoop
perfect,just perfect👏👏

Thank you :)

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