Pathar ka sanum ~prt6pg8~FINALLY

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PATHAR KA SANUM

Love is when you take away the feeling, the passion, and the romance in a relationship- and find out you still care for that person.

Starring:

Iqbal khan …as…iqbal khan

Neha bamb as amna

Rajeev khandewal as Sharim

Amna sharrif as visaal

character analysis:

Iqbal khan : 28 years old ….a successful business tycoon in this much young age he has 3 soft ware houses and owned a diamond firm ! he is serious and mature by nature…very few people know about his life and lost love ! …he is some how stubborn not believe in love! Only thing he know very well how to earn money …and his only aim in life to reach at peak level of business world!

Sharim : lawyer and best friend of iqbal khan . he has humorous nature. He is married to a sweet lady visaal …and has 3 years old son ..he love life and very well know about how to spend it!

Amna hayyat : 21 years old …recently did her MBA in marketing …looking for an ideal job. She is fun loving and bit immature girl by nature ..for her life is only fun …and accomplishment of aims…all she know is how love ……and how to make others love her sweet personality !

Visaal: 34 years woman wife of sharim …..she sweet and beautiful …she always says " mera ik nahi do bachey hein ik zeeshan doosra sharim "!

Edited by cute_face86 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sweet beginning . Will b seeing a difft sujal a father. Waiting for the next part
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very nice beginning amna di......sound really gr888.....lukin fwd 2 read it.......... 👏......n the name of story is gr88888.........
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sounds interesting plzz cont soon
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part:1



We see a big house ….then the camera move inside and focus on kitchen …we see a woman cutting vegetable she then pour white meat in the container …she clean her hands with a cloth piece . she turned around and we see her face she seems to be a decent woman . she is wearing sky blue salwar kameez..a pearls necklace tie around her neck …! Any body can say she must be beautiful in her young age .! she yells a name !

Woman: amna …amna …kahan ho beta ?
A girl come down to stairs ..almost running down …we see her feet's ..Wearing khusaa payal …her feets are beautiful …then we see she is wearing white churi pajama …and black kameez ..white duppata ….the camera focus on her eyes …dark brown …beautiful eyes ….wearing nose pin …and light pink ..glossy lips ! finally ..we see her cute face ..she has slight chubby cheeks …beautiful smile ….! Finally she speaks !

Girl : ji mamma
Mamma: amna ..beta …kahan thi ..pata ajj tumhariflight hai shaam ki …phir bhi kahan
Amna: arey mamma plz …app preshaan mat ho …! I will manage ok !
Mamma: arey fir bhi ..
A man of adult age in grey suiting come over there and sit on dinning table !
Amna: dad
Man: arey meri beti …..
Woman: hayat sahib …app ki wajah se ye itna door ja rahai hai ….
Hayat: hein bhai amna …beta batao zara apni maa ko kitna door hai Malaysia …
Amna:hmmmm…ik phone ki doori per …
Mr hayat and amna laugh over this …and amna's mom mrs waheda hayat ..make faces !
Hayat: kiya howa begam ..bhai beti berhi hogai ..itna perha us ne …ab kiya apni perhai ko cholhey (stove) main jhonkey gi
Mrs.hayat: app ke business main bhi app ka haath bata sakti hai ye ..
Amna: oh mamma …..bhai hai us ke liya …app ko pata hai na …main apni identity khud banana chahti hoon ….
Mrs.hayat: tum baap beti ko jo samjh atta hi karo !
She left to bring fruits …! R hayat kiss amna on her fore head and hug her warmly !
They all had breakfast and then amna …left for her room t check whether any thing left from packing ! her flight is in evening at 7:00 pm ..from Malaysia airways she is going …she got job of marketing manager in "Khan group of industries" leading name in the business world .

Mr.hayat is from the city of Hyderabad deccan …but he is now settled in dubai. He owns a business of import export he has two lovely kids …ehsan hayat and amna hayat . ehsan dd MBA in finance two years before ..And amna who is one and two year younger then ehsan …recently complete her MBA in marketing. Both bro sis...Are very nice ,fun loving and decent by nature like their parents.

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at airport:

amna: mom please stop crying …app essa karogi gi tu main nahija paongi…na hmm…acha app bolo abhi time hai …nahi jaon main bolya!
Waheeda: main ne ess nah kaha hai
Amna:app khush nahi ho main nahi jati…
Waheeda: arey eta essay nahi kehtey !
…then there happened some emotional scene between mr.hayat 's family.!
Ehsan: ammo dear don't worry main wahan atta rahoonga ..aur infact main agley month arraha hoon ok…
Amna says yes and hug her brother tight ….after that leaving her family in tears left for Malaysia..she her self was in tears ..! she is going to make her career …not knowing what her destiny keep for her there in Malaysia .!

Coming up: amna reach Malaysia ..meet sharim and visaal ..iqbal's entry !


Edited by cute_face86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amna di very nice part........aray koi pasand kare na kare mai karte hoon pasand........continue kare jaldi se..... 👏
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amna di very nice part........aray koi pasand kare na kare mai karte hoon pasand........continue kare jaldi se..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 ..wah wah...great hai jee....lol..amna par tum baz nahi ayi...hehehe...IQ keh saath amna.. 😆 😆 ..lol...great hehehe..continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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farha ......tu chup reh nahi sakti ...bas chup reh kanjoos aurat ! 😆
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PART:2



Amna reach kulalampur Malaysia. She came out of airport after whole hectic customs …she saw a man with her name plate . she goes to him …he warmly shake hands with her!
Man: assalam-o-aliykum miss amna

Amna: walikum salam ..mr…

Man: sharim ..! sharim maqsood khan

Amna: I m amna …amna hayat

Sharim : I know …lets go …my wife must be waiting for us in my home

Amna: u r married

Sharim: hmmmm yeah your bad luck …

Amna: oh yes you are right ..she laughed!

Sharim and amna head to car and drove towards sharim's house! they reach there they entered in small beautiful banglow ..which face the blue seas ! the door open a gorgeous lady welcome them ;

Sharim: amna …meet my wife visaal ….

Amna: Assalam-o-aliykum

Visaal: walikum assalam

Amna: nice meeting u …well u r lucky ..u have sharim …

Visaal: and a son …aiyaan (my favourite name ..thats why changing)

Amna: oh he is so cute!

Sharim: don't get ideas u don't have chance with him too

Amna: don't worry ..if I get marry in near future and I would have a baby girl …he could marry her atleast ! sharim and visaal laughed!

Visaal: chalo bhot hogya kuch khalo aur amna u take rest ..u need it !

Sharim; u r right sweet heart

Visaal: I m always !

They had lunch then ….amna left to have some rest!


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we see big office ….some one feets …then we see the whole figure they handsome guy aged between 27 ..to 28 ….dark brown chocolaty eyes…! Pacing around to and fro rapidly ..the door open ..sharim come inside …the guy exhaled loudly ..and look at sharim ;

man: finally u r here ..kahan they tum?

Sharim: hey dude ….he slightly hit man's back .. if u remember I have to take amna ..from airport!

Man: kon amna…?

Sharim: IQBAL ……teri new …I mean teri diamond firm ki new marketing manager

Iqbal: oh yeah so she is here

Sharim: yeah and safe ….and at my home …

Iqbal: what she is doing there she supposed to report here right

Sharim: yaar abhi aye zara rest ker ke….

Iqbal: sorry magar us ko bulao mujey abhi milna hai!

Coming up: a big lecture from Iqbal to amna ..she get frustrate and about to leave her job!


Edited by cute_face86 - 19 years ago

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