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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok ok in couple of hors i m posting another part! 😳 😃
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~~PART:3~~



After about an hour we see Iqbal on his desk working on laptop then there is knock at door ; Iqbal "yes " .."may I come in sir " …a sweet voice …..Occur ….Iqbal lift up his gaze ..That's none other then amna …" Iqbal look at her with confused gaze "sir I m amna hayat "…Iqbal" amna hayat new marketing executive head of my firm right" he sad and cooked his bro" ye ---yes sir" …"so ms amna …..should I tell u or explain u the value of time " …he said in infuriated tone " s-sir I m sorry actually I was tired ..so I thought I should take bit rest "….she said hesitated "we call u here so far from u home …not for rest but for work ..or if u want to have rest ..we many other candidates ..who are same as u .." he said in loud voice " sir I know I was wrong ..i must had to report u first …but …….I m sorry" she says with her head down " sorry …what sorry ..what u think are we …idiots sitting her and waiting for madam to come and report …u r our responsibility here we have to let your parents know that u reached her safely …but u were resting right " /……" I m sorry sir "……………"its ok …now leave ….from tomorrow u should be here at sharp 9:30 get it" …..yes sir she said kind of relaxed tone .


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Amna through her bag on bed and hold her head …finally fall on her back …..the door open and visaal came in and asked politely "what happened Iqbal scolded u right " …..she sad smiling ' from today I will not expect more from him …he is very rude " ……"yes I know ..But he is nice "…."nice my foot …." Amna said in angry tone she continue to talk" is his the way he communicate with his employees" she said 1 her cell rang …the flashed name spread the beautiful smile on her face " hello ejaz assala-o-aliykum ..kesey hein app " the camera now focus on other side ..we see a handsome guy wearing frameless glasses (ejaz khan) ..and smiled " walikum assalam I m fine what about u haan ?" he said " I m good ……" said amna …"mujey se miley agair chali thora wait kerleti ik din ruk jati "…he said in fake angry tone" oh sweetheart ….actually mujey ajj he report kerna that u …" "its ok don't worry main mazak keraha tha …." He said laughing …" hmmm aur " …."aurkuch nahi bas tumey kal call keronga"….fine she said slowly….."Allah hafiz and missing u very much " …..me too …Allah hafiz" she said and keep the phone down. Visaal asked cheerfully"ur fiance …" ……"yes" she said blushing hard!

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~Coming up~: biggest shocked of amna's life …..make her shatterd …sharim and visaal support her! …what is so ..bad happen to her!

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~~SORRY FOR SHORT PART~~

Edited by cute_face86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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No it was really good plz contiune soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls continue waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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~~~~~~~~~PART:4~~~~~~~~~~~~~

After abut five mins ejaz again make again make a call ….amna see the number and pick up her cell smiling amna become naughty…and says …" kiya howa mr. intezaar nahi hota app se humara " …..ejea understand her naughtyness…and says .."arey main ne tu tumhey kuch sunaney ke liya call ke thi …" …"kya ..?" she ask getting excited ….."have u seen promos of " kabhi alvida na kehna " SRK'S new movie .." …."hmm not yet …bas thora sa flash dekha tha " …..she says in normal tone " well…us ka title track ….it is just fab ….wanna hear "……he asked cheerfully " tum sunao gye tu " ..she again lay on bed …and smile cutely " ok …" he said "tu sunu" …he start !

Tum ko bhi hai khabar Mujh ko bhi hai pata
Ho rahaa hai juda dono ka rasta
Door ja ke bhi mujh se tum meri yadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Tum ko bhi hai khabar Mujh ko bhi hai pata
Ho rahaa hai juda dono ka rasta
Door ja ke bhi mujh se tum meri yadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Jitni thi khushyaan sab kho chuki hein
Bas ik ghum hai ke jata nahi
Samjha ke dekha behla ke dekha
Bas ik chain hai ke is ko atta nahi atta nahi
Ansoo hein ke hei angaray
Agg hai ab ankhoo se behna
Kabhi alvida na kehna Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna

Rut arrahi hai rut ja rahi hai
Dard ka mausam badla nahi
Rang ye ghum ka hai itna ghera
Sadyoon bhi hoga ye halka nahi halka nahi
Kon janey kiya hona hai
hum ko hai ab kiya kiya sehna
Kabhi alvida … Kabhi alvida na khena…
Kabhi alvida na khena…

Tum ko bhi hai khabar Mujh ko bhi hai pata
Ho rahaa hai juda dono ka rasta
Door ja ke bhi mujh se tum meri yadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna


"wow this is really touchy ….good choice magar ejaz " ….she says cheerfully "hum tu kabhi juda nahi hongye ..tu fir ye gana kyun " duffer it is my choice only samjhi hum kabhi ……" ….a car come from and hit the walking figure of ejaz ….he fall ..!he scream "amnaaa" …."ejaz …ejaz …kiya howa tum ko ejaz bolo ejaz " ….some one come and take ejaz cell which is in blood too " hello " …"hello kon bol raha hai ..ejaz kahan hai " …"madam ye sahib ka accident ho ya hai n ki halat kharab hai ..hum in ko …..hospital le ker jarey hein …." …"ye ye kahan hai "…."Manama bahreen"!

amna call urgently a ejaz's home …she informed her to be mother in law about accident . two days passed …she was intouch with her in-laws ….when the news ome ….her brother in law informed her "ejaz a is duniya main nahi raha " …..she fall on her knees …world seems to be stop for her ….she was on ja nimaz ..and fall in sajda…..she cried " kyun ..kyun howa mere saath essa …..kyunnnnn ….she screamed …visaal come inside running and askd " amna kiya howa …" her face which is in tears ….her blank face …..her dead emotions told every thing to visaal! Visaal hugged her " bas kero chup kero ….Allah ki cheez thi us ne le li bas chup ho jao " !

~COMING UP~: ...AMNA TOTALLY CHANGE ...SHE IS NO MORE .....THE WAY SHE WAS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~WHO WILL CHANGE HER ~~~?IQBAL ..STUBBORN ABT AMNA~~~~~~~~~DO FUNNY THINGS IN STUBBORNESS~~~~~~~~~
Edited by cute_face86 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
superb part amna di......itne jaldi ye song likh bhi liya.....song suna hai apne ye......bohot zabardast song hai...... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah mine fav too ..fakhra 😳 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

yeah mine fav too ..fakhra 😳 😃 😃

amna di aap mera name bhul gaye......😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

should i continue or not 😉

amna d u should cont....plzzzzzz jaldi post kare next part.........😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
No plz contiune soon this fan fiction with all the others I love your stories.

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