OS: Night Of Honour

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

beautiful os dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm...

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Oh so sad! Pls continue and make it right! The past is but a stepping stone to the future. Pls. make it right.😭

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

I'm sorry. But I really don't understand. Arnav's action and words did not match. His action was that he left a girl he claimed to love at the alter and his words are "I'm sorry I can't curse your life because I love you?" No. His words are smokescreen for his cowardly act so that Khushi goes away still hang up on him unable to move on. Away from him but still in love while he can move on with his knowing that he can get her back anytime he feels like. That is not honour. In fact, that is the most cowardly and selfish thing to do.

He left the girl who almost lost her life to save his own because her aunt is responsible for his mother's death. His mother committed suicide. Regardless of the reason, she was the one who chose to pull the trigger on her own daughter's wedding day. She destroyed her daughter's happiest day with her selfishness. So he can blame Garima and his father for breaking his parents' marriage, but he can't blame Garima or his father for his mother's death. And even if he does, Khushi has repaid that debt when she saved his life at the cost of her own. A life for a life, isn't that how the saying go?

Edited by tia.o - 13 years ago

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

absolutely beautiful!!! Poignant!👍🏼

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

👏 Absolutely brilliant👏 Could you continue please? I know that they seem to have parted forever, but if DM kept bringing them back to each other all this time, then surely she will bring them back together again, right😳

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

nice updt

luvd it

thanks for pm

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

This was such a beautiful OS. Why dont you write more OSes?

You paint such a painful picture of their love for each other, painful because they realize its going to be incomplete. The love, that he has for her, pure and innocent, tainted by the past so horrible that neither of them can change anything, or how it affects their presence. I loved how beautifully you have described Arnav's expressions all through his narration of the past, or the answer to her question.

I should be angry at him for leaving her like that, for not giving them a chance but My respect for what Arnav said here "It has made you the woman you are today- she contributed to making you the woman you are today. The woman I love." changes my opinion.

I love it, Rafa,...You are a wonderful writer. Just yesterday I was fangirling over your FFs to another of my favorite authors here, Maya (Inked) of -khushi-.

Thanks for the PM

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Wonderful OS.. Loved it.. Arnav doesnt want to put Khushi in any situation which wud keep her away from her loved ones...

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

that was beautiful!

and i loved the way you described Arnav's emotions. I mean you'd expect him to go all bitch ass on khushi and blame her, but this was such a mature outlook. and for some reason understandable. i mean yeaa i'm a sucker for happy ending, but it would be so outa place if they got married abhi. I mean even if you see it from a human's point of view in general and not just fictional characters, would u marry somebody who's mother loved your father and that lead to nasty events? nope it wasn't khushi's fault in any sense, but just the fact you have2 make peace with it is very hard.

and i f**king adore Khushi! she's my rockstar, the final words, "its over" are still ringing in my head. i mean both are trying to do something for the other, Khushi wants him to be happy knowing he probably won't be without her, and he doesn't wanna hurt her so he doesn't tell her to leave her own mother for his sake. that's the beauty of these 2...

i absolutely loved the OS! it was amazing!! i really wanna see how they'd progress in their lives after this situation, how they would try moving on in their own lives, starting from scratch. i wish you would continue it, but leaving it here makes sense too, cus both the characters got the closure. though i'm kinda sad that these 2 are sad. humph