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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

nice update y s he arrogant towards kushi n her mom...wat s the matter between thm???wat thy did to him??y he s torturing thm...finally y he regretted and wat abt kushi's dad??interesting but quite confusing and lot of questions running in my mind...update nxt part soon n plss clear me k...thanks for PM...

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pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Interesting !!! Atleast now he realized his mistake ...

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome

y is he doing this

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome update !! Glad that, Arnav realized he is wrong

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sandhyait

just read both d parts...
really a diff concept...
Arnav is so mean..
hope he changes soon..
P.S. then its good to hear tat u and ur mom are so close... wish this beautiful relation continues for years...
God Bless!!

thanks frnd😃

there is shock to you all in this story😲

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: priyalovely
nice update y s he arrogant towards kushi n her mom...wat s the matter between thm???wat thy did to him??y he s torturing thm...finally y he regretted and wat abt kushi's dad??interesting but quite confusing and lot of questions running in my mind...update nxt part soon n plss clear me k...thanks for PM...

he has revenge towards Khushi and her mom
reason will be in later parts

dont b confuse. i will give you hints at afternoon

there is big shock gng to cum in this story

Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Precap for part3:

Arnav : i m stupid. i easily fall into his trap Aman.I am such an
heartless animal.i have done biggest sin in this world.
i have no rights to live in this world Aman i have no
rights.

Aman :relax ASR relax,(suddenlly he hears...
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Khushi : Arnav at first you hurted me now you are taking care of me
i really dont understand you(cuts off by Arnav)
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Aman :you are really beast. if...i will kill you...
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Khushi :i really wish to die Aman bhai. i hate to live in this world...
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Khushi :you are not fit to live in this world...
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Doctor :I am so sorry sir she has bleeding in her brain and
severe wounds inside her tummy so there is...

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i am sorry frnd i am confusing you lot.
in part3 there will some twist. and in this part khushi's dad is introduced.

i will update it 2day ni8

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

thanks for PM...nice precap but confusing also...exciting n interesting...update soon cant wait for nxt part...

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rosalinda92

@rosalinda92

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

just continue soon and pm me coz i like your story :D

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

PART 3

At car parking (basement)

Arnav : i m stupid. i easily fall into his trap Aman.I am such an
heartless animal.i have done biggest sin in this world.
i have no rights to live in this world Aman i have no
rights.

Aman :relax ASR relax,(suddenlly he hears arnav calling khushi's
name, so he turn back see khushi standing behind him)
khushi what happen,did doctor said anything.

Khushi:no Aman bhai,they still continuing there treatement, but
mom is out of danger.

Aman was so touched by khushi addressing him as bhai.

Arnav who was standing as dumb seeing khushi in parking ,
now he started towards staircase (from basement to1st floor of hosp)
suddenly he felt khushi's hand on his shoulder(still he is last step to 1st floor).

he turn back to see khushi standing behind him.he gave her one look and asked her

Arnav :why did you stop me. what(cuts off by khushi)

Khushi:what did you say arnav to Aman bhai . are you repenting for
your act. i cant believe you.

Aman you was still standing down near the steps. replied

Aman : its true khushi,he is repenting now . he is really worried for
hurting you and your mom.

khushi again looked at arnav and asked him

Khushi : Arnav at first you hurted me now you repenting for it
i really dont understand you(cuts off by Arnav)

Arnav :yes i am repenting now . i also feel guilty. do you know
why. its bcos of you damnit. you are the reason.

Khushi :what you are feeling guilty for me.(with tears) i am(cuts
off by him again)

he held her both shoulders harshly and said

Arnav :i feel guilty its not bcos of just hurted you(cuts off by khushi)

Khushi :what!!, "its not bcos of just hurted me" . that means you have
planned something more than hurting.

he started to laugh loudly . Aman and Khushi were really shocked to see him laughing like this. he laughed for more than 15mins and finally he held her neck forcibly in his one , his other hand holds her both hands and said.

Arnav :oh my dear darling . you want to know it now
(his grip in her neck gets tightened,khushi started struggle
to breath, then Aman came to help her )

Aman :ASR what are you doing, she is struggling to breath leave
her right now.

Arnav :wow wow Aman its very interesting, you are supporting her,
i really "i have to clarify one doubt,if she is your wife or mine?"

Aman and Khushi was speechless to his question,but still he holds her neck and said to aman

Arnav :what happened both become silent. what Aman why
are you silent . better i will tell you answer for my ques.
"she is married to me and spend weddng ni8 with me" do
you get that. then why the hell are you ordering me damnit.

is hold in her neck gets tightened for each time he speaks.Khushi
is now feeling dizzy. after seeing her in this state Aman gets angry
and started to release arnav's grip on her neck but with the other hand he pushed aman.

now aman held Arnav's collar and shouted

Aman :you are really beast. if you dont leave her ,i will surely kill
you ASR.i am really feeling bad to have your frndship.
you dont deserve to be an human.leave her.

while Aman saying these words to arnav, but arnav is just staring at khushi and laughing at her struggle to breath .then fiinally khushi
started to speak

Khushi :i i i...rea...ll.y.. i really wish to die Aman bhai. i hate to live
in this world with this evil.atleast after my death he wil
be really happy.i am unlucky bhai(she sobs in between).

Arnav :wow my lovely wife wants to die,but your death should also
be my wish,i already told you about it.

Khushi :you are not fit to live in this world arnav. if i am alive or
death but i wont live with you.and you have no rights
to decide my death

with that she jerks from his grip and fell down from stairs , her stomach hit in nearby gate and she has bleeding in her head, she become uncousious after that.

Arnav and Aman are shoked to the core they didnt except this to happen. they were rooted at same place.

after 10 mins people in parking area came and tooked her inside the hospital.

Aman was 1st to came his sense he shaken Arnav and said him

Aman : i wont spare you for this and then he also went inside hosp.

after half an hour:

Aman :how is she doctor

Doctor :I am so sorry sir she has bleeding in her brain and
severe wounds inside her tummy so there is less
possibilites for her to concieve. And we have to
wait for bleeding to control in her brain. after that
only we can come to know about damages in her
brain. And i want to meet her husband.

Voice :Her husband is not here...

Aman was again totally shocked to the person standing .

to be continue.

i am really feel bad to write this part and hurting khushi.

Arnav has not changed, he has become more creul and heartless person after knowing that infomation

comment me if you like.

Edited by jenji08 - 12 years ago

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