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Well well well what can I say... It's amazing, it's epic, it's wonderful, it's romantic, it's intense
All these descriptions fall short of your writing yaar! I mean the passion which you write with is... Speechless seriously yon have a god given talent to write.. And I'm glad your not letting it go to waste! You know I always wait for your updates p, everyday I come back from school and see oooh 10 Pms .i wonder if Mushfika is one of them, during school when I get emails to say you have revived a pm... But it's never you :( but I see a pattern you update over the weekend... And you updates are a stress reliever... Trust me stress gets to me soo easily you don't know how i passed my gcse's and how I've started my alevels but your updates cheer me up... I just love it... And your ff is something I read since I joined India forums so its great :D a huge smile :D
Now onto your update... I always notice every small detail especially from your fr, and it's also becausSimple things please my mind hahahahah! Just loved the way khushi was clinging on his shirt... The passion, he pr being scared and arnav being the only one who she can rely on is the speciality of their relation... And arnav being mad at the world but so delicate with khushi is mind blowing.. I deffo want someone like him for me :) the way she didn't even want to let go of him I felt, her pain, her worry, and the way arnav wanted so badly to go taunt his so called dadi but couldn't because khushi is his first. Priority loved to see it! I like how this update focused more on them, and ther trust, love, it was amazing... Tough I would love to see dadi bashed by her potha hahahahahahahahah wll I can't wait till next week for that ;). Loved how arnav knew she was lying over the phone, he knows her so well, the basis of a good relation, A strong relation, however much she lies he knows it- though thaA could be annoying at times, if your lying to hide a surprise lol! I even knew khushi was going to try hide the dadi abuse and say she dropped... But I loved how she alas goes to tells arnav and then... BAM the flashback of dadi threatening her come to her mind and she doesn't...! Dammit p.. But our arnav is no less, loved how he asked her yes or no questions.. She couldn't avoid them... Loved how he did question her 'truth' on the qualitative question but didn't doubt her bless him.,! :) our arnavs so clever hahahahha thanks god for that :) and yes the doctors call...
That's made me shout out in joy luckily I could cuz I was basically alone upstairs so no one would hear me... I did a khushi dance and then resumed reading a hahahahahah! So glad... I just so badly wanted arnav to hear what happened between the doctor and her, and about her wounds on her back... Ughmy back feels sore just thinking about it.. And the way docs like I know u've told mr Raizada about yor wounds and he's probs thinking... She hid alot of pain away from everyone suffering alone! And to wear backless suits... Well thats'll be a turn on for our ASR ;) lol! He's going to take proper care of his wife like one should! :) his mom would be so proud of him.m he's the best... He had to control his anger towards dadi and look after his khushi :) and dadi, who's going to help her now yeah baby karmas coming and it's going to knock you out :D spooo happy :) can't wait till next week when arnav confronts her anpboutbher wounds on her back, when he rubs antiseptic cream on her back... Should be some fantastic rabba ves :D
Awhhh Mushfika u just do such a goood job., you should publish this ff as a. Book... And never end it.. At least in the near future this better go on for atleats 50years :) :D I just loved it, words cannot describe... I've used every single word that comes to mind yet I'm can't get over reviewing the updates, your so mean for cutting it, you should've made it even longer :P I hope you update very soon and that to a dhamakedar one... Not that they aren't anyways but this next update is going to just be amazing... Right I'm going to stop writing now so you can carry in and psot the update very soon :) can't wait... It's weeks going to drag now... Loved the update incase j hadn't said already :) thanks for he pm
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