Originally posted by: Sweta...
Mushfika... What can I say to you... I really hope you love my essay replies
...nbecause gues what that's what your going to get every single time you update an ff, ss or Os!
Because your writing is magical...maven when you updated this and it's abt dadi
Shockingly I don't hate you! :P but I do hate dadi more hahahahahah!
Your comments just make me smile! Your so down to earth, I love you :D seriously... Your so nice... And your ff's are just epic! Really I just love this ff! I was actually shocked to see you had updated... Ad I was checking my Pms and I read and he returned and I saw MUsHFIKA had sent it! My day just got a whole lot better... :D literally I was smiling so widely literally I was just looking at my iPad screen while my sister was talking to me... I looked so foolish she even asked what I was reading/ looking at tht I was smiling so much and then I clicked on the link thinking yeah finally, an update :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) seriously I love this ff! And I always love commenting what I loved abt the scenes because u get some feedback, other than it was awesome... Because u don't exactly know what made I awesome lol! But your ff is AWeSOME! And he returned is just EPIC like I said before... Because the way it is depicted, even if its a shirt update I covers a lot, in detail and emotion.
Now... The update my likes(eepven though it was more of dadi I still liked it; I' ll explain now lol)
So I read the above how it was abt dadi and I felt :/ oh dear what's she going to do to our khushi, and arnavs khushi... And then the wa she sent everyone away I thought what's in her mind really? : O and when she accuses her of trapping Shyam and arnav I'm flinching getting ready to punch smeone/something! And when's she's say khushi has no character my brows make a monobrow and my sister was like what's wrong... Why u angry... And again I had to lie hahahah... She doesn't know I'm obsessed with ipkknd! She doesn't even know... She's not the serial type! But yeah and then when dadi because the domestic torture I begin to go ahh... Ouch... Ooh and I feel dadi pulling my hair... Hitting me with a stick... Yet the feeling that you can't tell anyone and the the pain... It brought tears to me... Just her arnavji can take the pain away... By the phone call... There was not way she wud tell him! But I felt satisfied when she smiled becaus of her convo with arnav! And then when she ges down with fullmsleeves and nani questions her... How much does she have to lie for everyone's happiness... And all she's gettin is grief! I felt for her... N when she lies that she's going mandir b actually she goes hospital and lies there saying she dropped, I hope the doctor tells arnav, or arnav sees the marks and then he puts medicine on her wounds... She'd feel less pain then! She sooo nice! Then when the phone of arnav came again I'm thinking awhhh and then u stop it there...
And I scroll down to find out u finished the update there... That's tsooo mean Of you to do Mushfika! :P I can wait for the next update I hope arnav comes back in the next update and sees the torture khushi is bearing for him! Is going to be dhamaedar :D I'm waiting desperately for the next part! :D literally I while you update very very very soon! Thanks a tonne for the pm... Before my sis catches me I'm gunner post this now... Remember update soon :)
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