ArHi OS: First Date

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hina

@mid-night-sun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

That was really really cute
Loved it a lot

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

sooo cute..loved it yaar...can u continue dis??

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Priya

@LoveYouChutki..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Fantastic grl... Beautifully written... I loved it...

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Maha Khan

@Charmz_58

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow simply awesome out of words now n plz if u can do continue it only one more part but plz do continue while reading this i was like plz dont come to end😳😊

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

aww adorable...truly... I simply loved it... *sigh*

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rrd29

@rrd29

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Lovely...please continue and make this into SS atleast ...great style of writing... looking fwd to their next date

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

THIS WAS SOOO MEGGGAAA ADORABLLEEE AAAHH <3

Loved it! Loved how their thoughts changed from the begining till the end! It was awesme! Arnav was such a gentleman! Loved how he opened up to her on the first date only. Loved how unknowingly they kept talking about marriage haha how cute 😃

loved how khushi didnt eat her cake just cuz Arnav couldnt have it! She's such a sweetheart! I loved how you explained how different they are! The cake and the coffee thing! Haha very nicely done!

I just loved how khushi said 'atleast you didnt fire him'! She was able to look at the good side of the whole thing completely ignoring the wrong side of it and completely accepting him how he is! WONDERFUL!

And the ending was just AWESOME 😃 again unknowingly they talked about marriage where Arnav cared about her studies which i loved the most and the realisation that it was indeed the first date AND they were ready to marry each other ! Wonderfuulll Di! 😃

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Rashu

@sanZ_Rash

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Awww..that was so cute...

I really loved it...

Perfect first date...

Wonderful Os...👏

It is perfect everywer..

But, his parents death n all... do he ever share his secret to any one this fast...

I doubt that...😕

He could have say something else..I dont know ..

May be i am wrong.. Wen ppl are in love ..everything changes...

And i loved the last line..their first of a life time conversations...

Its beautiful..😊

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

loved it so much .. Arnav talking about marriage first ..and the conclusion .. really beautiful. 😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Awww... that was so cute.. Loved it totally.. Wish it was more... Don't u plan another part of it?? I wold love to read more, & how they spend their day now.. Yup m dreaming now😉

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