~'Dil Hai Tumhara~'(Rajeev n Amna)

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tuhina

@tunna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

heyi mehreen... me too witing for the wedding... post soon... 😃 😊
n wow ..i'm manasvi's cznnn... 😃

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#162

hey guyz i m soo sorry i m not able to continue................but i promise to you that i post the part in tomorrow evening........"insallah" ..........

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#163

Its ok but plz try 2 post asap.
m eagerly w8ing 2 read the part 😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#164

😭
ab tak cont nahi kya? 😭

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#165

hey dont cry rajeev_gr8.................here i am with my story........maine chracters phele bata diye thay.............

Next part........

RAJEEV:bhabhi........bhabhi.....
Manasvi:kia baat hai Rajeev q chila rahe ho....(talking on fone)...

Rajeev:bhabhi......ufff.....aap to phone pe baat ker rahe hain...

Manasvi:aik min... roko.....(on phone).....mai baad mai baat kerte hoon per shadi pe pohoch jaana.....ok bye..... haan Rajeev bolo aab

Rajeev:bhaia kaha hain......

Manasvi:wo to apney kuch frnds ko invite kerne gaye hain q.....koi kaam tha

Rajeev:ohhh...chaley theek hai.....mai chalta hoon......

Manasvi:baas yehi kehna tha...

Rajeev:hmm......bye.....

Manasvi:pagal.....

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At Oberois house.....
Amna:bhumi kia baat hai pareshan laag rahe ho..

Bhumi:haan di......wo actually mai kubse diya ka fone try ker rahe hoon......per lug nahi raha.....

Amna:oh.....mai to batana bhool gaye..os ka fone aya tha wo parson pochche ge......shadi mai nahi pohoch paye ge per reception pe a jaye ge...

Bhumi:oh.....aha theek hai.....wase apne mujhe kaal q nahi bataya.....??

Amna:madam........kaal aap saara din Arjun k saath thi...kayse batate.....

Bhumi:dii aap bhi na baas.....mai chalte hoon.....

Amna:kaha Arjun se milne.....

Bhumi:kia di......bye......

Amna:bye.....

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wedding time......barat arrives.....
All boyz r wid Rajeev n all galz r wid Amna.....Ronit goes on stage n makes a announcment......

Ronit:xcuess me everyone........aaj yahan hamare beti Amna ki shadi meray bohot achay dost Anurag k betay Rajeev k saath ho rahe hai......saath he hum yahan apni dosre beti bhumika ki shadi bhi announce ker rahe hain jo humne Arjun k saath tay ki hai......

everyone claps......while bhumi shocked.......
Bhumi:waatttttt........

Arjun smiles..... 😳 .....

Angad:congratz....

Arjun:hmm......oh......haan thanx......

Angad:kia baat hai........yehi to tum chahte thay.....

Arjun:hmmmmm........(smiles)
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Kripa(2 bhumi):wow bhumi congratz.....

Bhumi(still in shocked situation):haan...hmmm thanx............
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all frnds r standing.....
Lakshya:wooww Arjun u r to lucky jo chaha mil gaya..

Tanya:bhumi to q chup khare hai..oh sorry aab to mujhe bhumika bhabhi bulana hoga...

(everyone laughs....)

Angad sees on door......
Angad:wowww........yaar kia larkiyan hain........

Kripa also sees.....

Kripa:Angad......tum apni nazrien idhar ker lo.....kyunkay tum jaante nahi wo kon hain.....

Angad:kon?????

Kripa:wo bhaia k frnds hain smjhay.....

Angad:watttt..............
Kripa goes there........
Kripa:hi sur.....hi bina hi adi.........

Sur,Binan Adi:hello kripa.....

Kripa:kafe dayr laga de......

Sur:wo baas.....trafic to tum jaante ho na......

Kripa:hmm.........wow sur u luking gr888.....

Sur:thanx......

Kripa:n adi u as usuall lukin handsome......

Adi:thanx........

Kripa:hmm wow bina nice dress......

Bina:thanx......

Kripa:come....bhaia se milwate hoon......

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Kripa:bhaia dekhiye kon aya hai.....

Rajeev:oh tum loog a gaye....(they all hug....)....amna ye meray frnds hain........Sur(sun_423)......ye adi...(adildagr8) aur ye bina(kulbin)....

Amna:hi......

S,BnA:hi.....congratz.....

Amna:thanx.....

Kripa:come mai baki subse milwate hoon......
Kripa introduces Sur Adi n Bina ....
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Suraj Manasvi r talking...
Voice:suraj manasvi....
they turns....
Suraj:tuhina mita tum loog......

They hugs......
Manasvi:kayse ho tum loog aur kub aye.....

Tuhina:baas abhi abhi aye........wow nice wedding.....

Suraj:thanx......

Manasvi:aur mita ghar mai sub kayse hain.....

Mita:sub theek hain......wase suraj tum kaha ghayb ho gaye thay shadi k baad nazar he nahi aye...

Suraj:haan wo kuch kaamon mai busy raha......

Tuhina:kaamon mai ya Manasvi mai......
(they all smiles)

Suraj:tuhina......
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Arjun:wase Sur tumhare koi aur frnd hai...

Sur:wo q............?????

Arjun:wo kia haina Angad ko bohot zarorat hai......

Angad:shut up yaar......sur ye ayse baas......

Sur laughs...
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Rajeev n Amna r also talking.....
Rajeev:amna tum khush hona......

Amna:Rajeev......ye sawal tum mujhse kamazkum 5 martaba poch chuke ho......aur mai kitne baar kahon mai bohot khsuh hoon.....

Rajeev:sach.....

Amna:haan sach........wase ye tum q poch rahe ho.......

Rajeev:ayse hi.....baas......

Voice:Amna......

Amna:farah tum.....

Farah(rajeev1):haan mai......congratz.....

Amna:thanx...

Farah:congratz Rajeev...

Rajeev:thanx.....

Amna:Rajeev ye meri frnd hai Farah...

Rajeev:ohhhhhhhh......

Farah:baki sub kaha hain.....

Amna:wo samne....stage pe.....

Frah:mai mil k aye ok.....

Ok guyz abhi tine hi.........baki paaka kaal post ker dun gi......subha mai.....
tc
luc
Mehreen.....
plzz do comments........

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#166

hey guyz no more comments here da next part...

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Bhumi:Arjun tum q baar baar time dekh rahe ho.....

Arjun:wo.....actually meri frnd ne aana hai...wase tumhey es se kia........

Voice:Arjun.....
Arjun n bhumi turns.........
Arjun:poonam........(they hug)........kayse ho.....

Poonam:theek thak........tum sunaoooooo......

Arjun:mai bhi........meet bhumika my fiance......

Poonam:hi bhumika...

Bhumika:hi.....

Poonam:that's not fair mere bina shadi......

Arjun:kaha abhi t baat paki hue hai.....

Poonam:hmmmmmmmm
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Rajeev Amna r talking wid Adi,Suraj Manasvi tuhina n mita........his mob ringd.....Rajeev sees the number.....its doc from goa.....

Rajeev:xcuess me.........
(he goes)
Amna(thinks)aysa ks ka fone tha k Rajeev ko uthna paara.........

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Rajeev:ji doc kahiye.....

Doc:Mr Rajeev aap achanak chale gaye.....aur reports bhi nahi le......

Rajeev:sorry doc wo kuch halat ayse ho gaye thay...

Doc:its o Mr Rajeev wase maine reports delhi k Life care hosp mai Dr.Karan Virani k pass bhej de hai.....aap unse lay le ga aur agay agar koi prob ho to Amna ko lay k unkay pass jaye ga.........

Rajeev:ji doc......thanx.....bye......
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Amna:kis ka fone tha Rajeev

Rajeev:wo......wooo meray frnd ka tha..........

Amna:oh acha.........

Angad:hey meri frnds a gaye........

Rajeev:kon.....

Angad:meet ayesha n unum............

Ayesha n unum:hi congratz.....

Rajeev n Amna:thanx.....

Angad:chalo mai baki subse milwata hon........

Lakshya comes to Rajeev n Amna
Lakshya:yaar shadi kub start hogi.....

Rajeev:mean........

Lkashya:matlab ...hum shadi mai to a gaye hain.....per.....

Rajeev:ufffff......lakshya tere czn a gaye.........

Lakshya turns.....

Lakshya:hi hiba........

Hiba:hi.....sorry 4 being late......(they hug).....

Lakshya:its ok.....

Hiba:congrtaz Rajeev Amna...

R&A:thanx......

Hiba:baki sub kaha hain......

Rajeev:wo samne hai Lakshya ese lay jao...

Lakshya:come Hiba........
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Kripa:bhaia........aur kitne dair.....

Prerna comes there
Prerna:kia baat hai lagta hai bachay bore ho rahe hain....

Kripa:mama shadi kub shuru hogi...

Prerna:shuru hi to hai.....

Kripa:mom........shadi...wo nahi......balkay pheray.....wale...(lolz)

Prerna:ufff......meri bache baas pandit ji ne kaha hai adhay ghante k baad .....

All czn:thanx god.............
Rajeev n Amna smilessss.........
Angad:kripa yaha aooo.....

Kripa:haan aye.....

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next part will be posted soon........
plzzz do comments
luv
Mehreen.....

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

mehru yeh comment do parts ke liye milkar...mehru yaaraaaaa toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd........ 👏 yaar very very very very very very very very very very nice job done...u keep up the good work... 👍🏼 dear u know mw liked my role very much...thanks a ton dear... 🤗
ab plz jaldi se continue karna me will be waiting... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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tuhina

@tunna

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#168

heyi mehreen... fabulous parts... wat a wedding ...with everyone... 👏
very very good yaar.... very good. ... 👏

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#169

fantastic parts 👏 gr8 work 👏 & i wont cry again if post next part a bit early 😉 😆 😊

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group_1223

@group_1223

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#170

wowwwwwww mehru..awesome part..i t was oo kewl how u managed 2 get all of us in the story.....thx alot yaar......yaaaaayyyyyyyyyy;...i m part of a fan fic ...lolz...
i hope mr. karan virani finds a solution 4 kash's illness...well he has to..oderwise bechare ke peechey is thread ke fan fic readers par jayein gey....well take carez...n well done 4 da last 2 parts again... 👏