ARHI FF: Master Class: Thread 3

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#531

Thank you thank you thank you for making them wake up together...it was beautiful and tender...

Its very difficult to live a relationship in the here and the now...n not contemplate the future and long for forever...

Looking forward to see how this progresses..

Great update naina!!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Aww.. loved how arnav was holding back and poor kushi.. lookinf orward to what is gonna happen next.. awesome fabulous update

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Hai Naina update was really awesome.Like it very much especially when it is rain need more time for shower...Rain outside, beautiful hot lady inside especially she is lover inside with him time shower not 15 min darling.I hope Khushi will tell him the exact reason...Waiting for next upddate Naina.Thanks for PM

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#534

it is was a awesome update.. i liked it how Khushi stood her ground.. her fears are obvious.. of not having forever with him.. and i can also see that arnav is seeing or experience how it would be if he was with her forever.. talking would do good.. but it is doesn't happen always in real couple.. sometimes they talk and spoil it and sometime they avoid talking and spoil it..

very nicely written naina.. there is nothing to not feel proud of in this update..

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Aaah, the morning after! The confusion, the feelings, the whole package seems to put our beloved couple in a tug of war in the relationship that both want to win! Nice! Cant wait to read the next update :)

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Poor Khushi, she loves him...but he does not do marriage...and she cannot be in a relationship without one...oohhh what delimma...

Edited by shreyasonia - 13 years ago

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#537

Nice Update!!
the night scene was cute...the morning - the confusion, khushi's worry about his notions on marriage..lovely!! The confrontation is On...tiger & the tigress are back..cant wait for it to unfold fully!!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#538

Naina...don't be so hard on yourself...its a great update. You have very successfully portrays Khushi's dilemma...her love for him vs. his abhorrence towards marriage, without which, she is unable to see a future for them. Arnav, is clearly trying to reign in his temper, offer comfort, but her cagey behavior is surely getting the best of him. I am looking forward to the next part... for I don't think its as impossible as Khushi think it is!!😛

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pearlo

@pearlo

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Hey...y Do ya need our suPport??u already have it!!! :) loved d update...patience is a virtue that the gr8 ASR has not been blessed with...but khushi should open up...I love this fierceness in Arnav n it spices uP their life n our too...:) Thanq 4 d pms n Tc dear...cheer up :)

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Nikki

@Chocolate...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#540

i liked this part.

it's just the way arhi is in the ff, it doesn't take long for them to get riled or mellow infact.

i think the ending was a tad bit meh. i personally felt that when arnav thought he shouldn't push it and then the fact his fear was sincerely put to rest, he had no reason to be so upset. true i wud be aggrivated if it were me but space is important too, khushi takes her time unlike arnav who is impulsive. but ur the author, u kno ur characters better than i wud ever hope to understand them.

great job! lets see who wins the battle.

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Nikki